tylar94

1yr

Commented

I love you writing style short chapters for you are actually very very long compared to all the other novels on webnovel on webnovel you're not as long as one of my favorites (a true beginning) But don't see your chapters are short when they're super along which is great the secretary of reading chapters that are only like 2 minutes long drives me crazy I can't read your chapters for like 10 minutes Keep it up. And check out that novel ( A true beginning) you might actually like it or get some inspiration from it

I had only planned on taking him to the past, not what he will do there. So, I will probably take the story fast. Within 20 chapters, Mason will be back into the Present, with all his goals covered(I hope).

Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again)

Movies · HelloDarkness07

tylar94

1yr

Posted

I'm trying to read it but it's just so hard when it says I'm playing tricks on Quinn to track for me track the main character it just really it makes no sense and it sounds super cheesy and it's really hard to enjoy it Just keep working on it edit edit and I'll try it again when it's been updated Overall it doesn't mean a good story has great potential I'm really interested I've got to work on the dialog make it not so cheesy

Marvel God of Blood

Anime & Comics · Atrox_H

tylar94

1yr

Commented

see if you can't recruit any one that would usefull man/women

The question is, do I make it an all-women harem ship or include some guys?

Stop it, Bro~ (One Piece x Baki)

Anime & Comics · FanHarem

tylar94

1yr

Commented

I would have liked it better if it was a mission given by the DGC And you made it into a very small arc

Let me know what you think about the explanation I gave. I know it's a little farfetched but I thought it was a good explanation with a little anime logic. Also a little shout out to my favorite tv doctor with that diagnosis.

Chronicles of a Telekinetic with a Group Chat (Archive)

Movies · RubberPeen

tylar94

1yr

Commented

what chic magnet what episode is that

Perry White tried knocking on the door to see us, but Jarvis told him to politely piss off while handing him a couple hundred dollars. When the chick magnet came to school, Bonnie flirted with him long enough to drain his powers and compel him to leave town.