@livingvoid has this been dropped? :/
I stand corrected, Great development of his character. Hope he stays on this trajectory and develops further.
ch 55 The dog and the owner are equally guilty
Fantasy · Barion_Trident
160 chapters and only 20 days passed is worrying. this is a bit too slow paced from that perspective. just a thought - add some time skips for training and miscellaneous things that happen in between. some conversations can also be skipped and summarised to keep the story progressing a bit quicker which also means his power will be progress quicker.
ch 159 *Feng Qingge Fall*
Eastern · JosieGan
plus he's been dealing with girls for 3+ years which is more than enough experience. Unless he's emotionally retarded.
ch 96 +Please Give Me Your Opinion+
Eastern · JosieGan
This is definitely your weakest mc yet and its weird why you intentionally made it that way. I mean weak as in his character. The situation with Su Fei was frankly trash writing, she was literally an abandoned chick. he didn't even fight for her despite loving her which quite frankly makes him a cuck despite all his gifts. Really disappointing considering how well your mc in cultivator with AI is but even he has glaring issues so yh. just my 2 cents
ch 96 +Please Give Me Your Opinion+
Eastern · JosieGan
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ch 171 The Queen's Service
Eastern · Dark_Crow1111
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ch 164 World Crown
Eastern · Dark_Crow1111
haven't noticed the dip in form. get well soon author.
ch 159 Killing a Eternal Saint Ancestor
Eastern · Dark_Crow1111
I agree, you can skip it if she's not one of the main female leads.
ch 151 Visiting the Elf Clan Part 1
Eastern · Dark_Crow1111
Great novel..............................
Eternal Life Begins with Taking a Wife
Eastern · Cucumber Lover