No hay mucho que quiera decir, quiero ganar algo de dinero haciendo mi pasatiempo (Entrenamiento) para luego hacer una novela.
2019-03-13 Joint Dominican Republic
Seriously, what is this about? Context is missing. In addition to being difficult to read, it lacks the aforementioned.
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La trama... Realmente no la entiendo. No se explica nada.
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It seems good, although I want the original source, I understand that from your original translation it must be shit grammatically speaking.
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You know that the feeling of love does not come from the heart... Right? It's just that your pupils dilate and your heart races when you are with the person you love. Even similar things happen if you're just excited. Ancient people believed that because they didn't have the technology to prove otherwise. I mean, your heart beats strong when you're with the person you like. Why would they think of anything else if not the most notable thing? But the reality is that the heart only pumps blood and nothing like giving you a feeling like love.
ch 47 Letters To Muzan
Anime & Comics · Charlottes
One year
Honestly, in my opinion the extended 'screen' romance is taking up too much text, becoming redundant. I think I speak for many when I say that most of us who read fanfics don't want to watch a LONG romantic drama. If you are going to do it, my recommendation is to make it as short and simple as possible. The detail is in the simple. The simple displays of affection and that's it. You're just tired of the drama.
ch 10 Probably a bald guy
Anime & Comics · Yogun_Van
It's a shame that this story tries to be a funny written anime. Personally, I don't like the gender change, but it's always passable under a good script. But this is like watching bad fan service. I had potential.
ch 0 4 Chapter 04: Memories
Anime & Comics · KiraWolf
That's why he hated Rob's episodes. It just feels more meaningful to appear with powers in another world than to have a god take you to another world granting wishes. Mainly because wish-makers make very specific wishes and literally some don't make the strongest ones because they want to make them 'interesting' which is stupid when you think they haven't tasted what it's like to have absolute power.
ch 0 1 1 Meeting God
Anime & Comics · ShadowRose13
Wow, a kid out. Although I don't understand what you're complaining about. If you erase his memory and he's still evil, amen. Not everything in the world is good but you will know that it will not bother you. Although, well, I guess I just don't agree that I didn't give him the benefit of the doubt..
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: Destruction of The Blind Eye Society and Gideon (2)
Anime & Comics · Herohero
It goes from 0 to 1000. The pace of this novel is too fast and you can't allow yourself to enjoy anything. . .
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How can he make a real version of Sasuke when he's never seen him... It's a mystery.
ch 0 4 Callejón(3)(Editado)
Anime & Comics · Siroks
My honest opinion from someone who did something similar. (Translated into English from Spanish) Continue it, but don't think about making it eternal or long. Think of an ending. If you can rush the ending without damaging your story, do it. This way at least you will finish them and understand how to start a story and end it. In any case, you can always give it a second 'book'.
ch 0 1 ** Question **
Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh_Official
Obviously 10. The guy is specific... At least he, Ben 10, is 10 years old.
ch 0 4 Post Episode 1 (R18+)
Writing Reality
Anime & Comics · Nevermore101