Mario_Alonso

1d

Replied to PsyLoRD

leaving this comment here in case someone answers.

I Created an Urban Legend in Tokyo

Anime & Comics · ihatesakura

Mario_Alonso

20d

Replied to Bout_of_madness

Leaving a comment here to see what SCP this was. [img=Relaxed]

"Fine, we will do it, any risk is worth the value of 99999." He said aloud as he made his decision.

Marvel: The Foundation

Movies · Darkstar_crow

Mario_Alonso

21d

Commented

I love your story author. Keep up the good work!

ch 38 Omniscience in Marvel 37

Omniscience in Marvel

Movies · Josh_Richie

Mario_Alonso

29d

Commented

Being a hero, however, only required me to beat up bad guys and save innocent people! What was more simple than that?!

Sussy Baka in MHA

Anime & Comics · The_Synonym

Mario_Alonso

2mth

Commented

author? is this dead?

ch 0 9 Cap 9

Watch your story on video for all universes

Anime & Comics · Darknight558

Mario_Alonso

2mth

Commented

Presentation

Tycoon of Video Games

Video Games · NewComer714

Mario_Alonso

3mth

Commented

komi shouko

Insert [Anime, Manga, Manhwa.. waifus you want to see in this fiction]

Systematic Multiverse Harem

Anime & Comics · Pinto_sh

Mario_Alonso

3mth

Commented

I prefer this. You could make a 2nd fanfic where you follow the pokemon grunt route. Loving the story by the way.

Option 1 - Let The Story Proceed How It Should According To The Original Games.

Playing PokeMMO In Another World

Video Games · DevilHanu

Mario_Alonso

3mth

Commented

Yes! This is fantastic, I hope you can do this author.

I would like to give a early warning to everyone, that I will be introducing oc both friend and antagonists early in the story with even oc plots as many things were left out by Kishimoto. And I've always wanted to play with the Naruto story in my own way, rather than using generic fanfiction plot. So If this isn't your preferred style, consider yourself warned.

Naruto: Blood & Pleasure

Anime & Comics · NexusPrimodius

Mario_Alonso

4mth

Commented

but... couldnt you live for a month with 1 pokedollar?? does this mean that an egg is worth 15000 months of food...

Undeterred, I engaged in a vigorous round of haggling, driving the price down to a more reasonable 15,000 Pokédollars.

Pokemon: Trainer SI

Anime & Comics · KK9494

Mario_Alonso

4mth

Commented

The chapters? By the way, I love your stroy author. Keep it up!

ch 371 Innovative

Tycoon of Video Games

Video Games · NewComer714

Mario_Alonso

4mth

Commented

So, tell me. What powers can be given to Riser Phenex?

Riser Phenex? DXD SI. Multicross?

Anime & Comics · Kaioshin

Mario_Alonso

4mth

Posted

It is a bit below average...WQ is somewhat choppy. The author doesnt speak English all that well and there are too many chinese expressions that ruin the flow and mood. There are even statements that contradict each other. Still, it is readable.SD is okay. Some dude is transmigrated to the year 1975. Though we are told the protagonist is someone that came to NY looking for opportunities he feels like a standard chinese story MC. Anyways, still okay.CD. Very unlikeable. As I mentioned before, MC Feels like a generic chinese protagonist. Other characters behave irrationally or outright weird several times. US. Very good. Author seems motivated and is pumping those chapters out.WB. It is okay. Author did in fact research abojt the things that he talks about but ghe way people are makes the world background feel weird, destroying the inmersion. Overall a 2,8. As an advice, I would try to avoid chinese cliches and behaviors when writing in a western setting. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] Anyways, have a nice day author.

King of games in the United States

Anime & Comics · ElReyCoronado18112

Mario_Alonso

5mth

Commented

Police I swear to God, not simping for a Child. (Couldnt find a gif with the song lyrics, so I chose the next best gif.)

'But FBI, I swear to God I only see her as my little sister when she was a kid!!'.

A life with the Author

Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn

Mario_Alonso

5mth

Commented

nope

No.

Starting Today I'll Work As A City Lord

Anime & Comics · GreenBlue17

Mario_Alonso

6mth

Commented

An apartment costs as little as a pokemon with unknown potential.

The cheapest one had a rent of 700 Poke, while the most expensive one cost 2000 Poke. The buying price, at least the ones that could be bought, was ranging from 280.000 to 650.000 Poke.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

Mario_Alonso

6mth

Commented

1. Halo X Warhammer

GATE: Thus The Imperium of Man Fought There

Anime & Comics · Ray_Vorhard_2199

Mario_Alonso

6mth

Commented

i would love to see a character who is older than original MC.

While we are still approaching the end of this story, write to me in the comments. What elements would you like to be present in the new story? Which aspects of this story do you think should be improved for the next one, and which should be minimized?