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This just became one of my favorites. Story was always good but the ending of first arc just made it amazing. It is like i paid an author money to make a fanfiction. It has one of my favorite genres 'Gamer' but also 'World Hopping' and also managed to make both work. Most Gamer stories make main characters to op to even enjoy the story and most World Hopping ones changes the setting like author changes clothes. This here managed to both make gamer in that specific flavor that is extremely good to read and also managed to make the setting feel like mc really lived in there. My only complain is upload frequency. 'I want moar' in caveman language. I wish author good luck in future and just wanted to say this is a good fanfiction.

I like the story but i feel like Fortuna was not inculuded in a good way. Feels like all she has is a half developed cardboard personality and 1-liners that you can see in any Danmachi stories with some grammer. I also dont understand why you choose to even include her to the story. He could have gone to a diffrent familia of a newly desended god/goddess in orario and with it you could have incopareted some world development to the story.

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Thank you for replying it but can ı ask a question. In the title it says innocent overlord so do you plan on making him like ophis (you know powerful, innocent and like a child) because ı have seen many (not that much but you get it) fics like this but after the chapter 10 it becames this “ I was innocent and naive but my ……(important person) died and now ı must become the most powerful being alive” and the mc becames a egdy power hungry man. (And also sorry ing is not my first language)

I think it would be a good story if you can correct the capital letters and grammer mistakes but I have to say the story line is interesting but why every 10 sentences do descibe the MC’s beauty?

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