Understanding love's different ways!
2020-03-12 Joint United States
Need more chapters! I love this book!
Four chapters please more chapters thank you.
ch 0 3 DATHRAI DARCUNA
Fantasy · SilentMild
I like the way the author described forest and the blood left behind on its leaves by those walking through.
Uninvited visitors left twigs and vines broken, befouling the greeneries with their blood.
Fantasy · SilentMild
Thank you but would you please help me with this. Thank you.
Donna had thought the sheets a strange gift and Deanna's words even stranger, but was glad for the soft lavishness of lying on them flesh to satin. Not that John had noticed. He was too busy designing a new high-rise in Seattle. His hours got longer and longer away from home and he was constantly back and forth to Seattle. She knew one thing, she would be so glad when the Seattle job was completed! It seemed to her that it had really put a strain on their marriage, especially their love life. With that, she slowly closed her eyes and drifted off into another world, a world of pleasant dreams.
Urban · texascann
Also, love your book cover!
ch 0 2 DEATH ISLAND
Fantasy · SilentMild
There is suspense, drama, and lots of adventure, and you only have two chapters so far! Wow! I noticed that you called the MC Samwise and later called him Sam. Also, several small errors in grammar. Other than that, this story has a great start and I am anxious to read more! Please update soon. You have a winner! update!
ch 0 2 DEATH ISLAND
Fantasy · SilentMild
Will be glad to. Will do tonight. (9/21) here in U .S.
Another strong paragraph that grabbed me! End of life regret.
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Urban · Mar_Urbano
This paragraph is strong and it touched my heart . Great writing! I agree with Drapetomanic12, Wow!
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Urban · Mar_Urbano
I never, in my wildest dreams, thought that I would like a book like this but it’s so intriguing and interesting, I can’t wait for the next chapter! Come on author, let’s get another chapter so your faithful readers can make one more step hust like the Sojourners. Thank you for your writing and for taking the time to write extra chapters. I think you have a winner!
ch 0 3 DATHRAI DARCUNA
Isekai Institute
Fantasy · SilentMild