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PlotArmorSama

PlotArmorSama

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Don't worry, I've got your back. Just keep moving forward 😉

2020-05-11 Joint Ascension Island

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a little dense is fine as long as it's not like that guy from Infinite stratos or smth.

'I guess Mikoto is reaching her puberty and may have some issues. But what's gotten Kushina's panties twisted?' Kai tilted his head before frowning. 'Could it be like my condition? Maybe chakra caused some issues for them, too. Nah. I bathe with Kushina. That's not the case.'

RE: Filthy Gamer in Narutoverse

RE: Filthy Gamer in Narutoverse

Anime & Comics · FanHarem

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they liked meat so much they're even savoring it in their dreams! Kenshin be a good 'friend' and help them fulfill their craving, yeah?

Ganyu and Cloud Retainer were unconscious, but they were murmuring something that sounded like 'meat' or 'cannibalism', but Kenshin didn't care. He warned them after all.

Souls in Teyvat

Souls in Teyvat

Video Games · ARandomMob

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ICE COLD❄❄

"If I call him Father, maybe he'll respond." Mordred said word by word, "But if you call him husband, will he respond to you?"

Fate/Ultimate Antagonist

Fate/Ultimate Antagonist

Anime & Comics · XElenea

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say what now?

"You told me Pitou was supposed to be Gon's love interest and even showed me their couple pictures and merchandise…"

DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil

DxD: The Uncrowned Super Devil

Anime & Comics · Pastlives

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Hentai Shinobi Rule 8: The greater the mass, the greater the force of attraction.

RE: Filthy Gamer in Narutoverse

RE: Filthy Gamer in Narutoverse

Anime & Comics · FanHarem

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The bigger the booty, the more I wanna smash

Hentai Shinobi Rule 8: The greater the mass, the greater the force of attraction.

RE: Filthy Gamer in Narutoverse

RE: Filthy Gamer in Narutoverse

Anime & Comics · FanHarem

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I don't have much to offer to help you improve, but I'm going to write my thoughts anyway. I actually like this story and will stick around to see where it leads me. That aside I'm no critic so take my opinion with a grain of salt. First of all, his ability — Dark souls. It's straight out from dark souls and I love that franchise so I'm really happy to see it. Rebirth after death is pretty interesting but I feel like you could have done more with it rather than just a gimmick MC has. There's so much potential left untouched here. The DS games heavily focused on worldbuilding and how the curse affected it inhabitants. It would be nice to see how it affected the MC. You could've fleshed out this ability, set boundaries and how it affects MC and his mental state, or the consequences of dying so much. Dying so much can't be to a person's sanity, so it would be interesting to see him struggle to hold onto his sanity, or his descent into madness while getting shafted by his cursed skills and the situation it put him in with the hero party. Opinions of some value aside, Here's my rant: Why tf is he getting chummy with his cheating ex? like I get it he's a good guy and all, and wants to reconnect with his old party, but still why are you trying to get him on with the cheater and her minor daughter. He's 42 fgs. And there's this bs about him attending school with their daughter?? Personally I'm a harem fan, but even I would say just go no-harem and marry Alicia. I loved their interaction and hope to see more. The recent chapters with the old party just makes me uncomfortable. Yeah, that's about it. I rarely write reviews but I did it here cuz I found it really interesting. If someone bothered to read through this shit then gimme some recs. See ya.

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Replied to GodOfCulture69

Old testament

3. Haremites | Size Cap: World's Female Population

Playboy Cultivator in the Apocalypse

Playboy Cultivator in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Margrave

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Author you really put some thoughts into this. I really like it.

Eileen was, after all, the only Eclipse he had right now. Renji had one main expectation from her: that she'd prioritize him above all else and understand her role as a "subordinate."

Fallen Chronicles

Fallen Chronicles

Fantasy · Hail_The_loli

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why did he need to specify his skin color like this... bro he racist

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Pokemon: Trainer SI

Pokemon: Trainer SI

Anime & Comics · KK9494

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yall get allowance?

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There was no way someone like John could oppose his son if things turned violent. And thus the old man cowardly shrunk back into his seat, trying to make his existence as small as possible. Before meekly admitting defeat.

Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist

Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist

Urban · Zentmeister

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...did you just insult him for being an American?

This, of course, caused Keith to become enraged. Not only was he hungry, but he had just been called a fatass for the millionth time in his life. He quickly rose from his seat, or shall I say slowly, as it took him a few moments to actually get out of his desk. All the while shouting towards the class.

Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night

Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night

Urban · Zentmeister

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Commented

wait I thought his name was kanji?

And now that I was done getting Benji's sacred gear, why not go ahead and take the other one while we are at it?

Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent

Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

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