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Tobirama wasn't shown to be that dependent on his Teleportation Jutsu like Minato. Minato's whole fighting style and even his identity are related to Flying Thunder God Jutsu. In the anime, we clearly see him using this Jutsu for day-to-day activities. On that topic - I kind of wonder why he didn't just teleport away with everyone while being surrounded by the enemies. Instead, he went to sacrifice himself to save Sarutobi, Danzo, and others. I don't know if this is a pothole or not. Or maybe I am completely wrong here. You could create theories based on why he didn't use teleportation to get everyone out of danger including himself. This might give you the difference between Minato's and Tobirama's teleportation techniques. Theory 1. Maybe, unlike Minato, Tobirama cannot teleport with multiple people at once. I would have liked to say that he cannot teleport with others but we have seen him teleporting with Naruto and Sasuke in the 4th great ninja war. 2. For this point, you can add it to the first point - Tobirama is incapable of teleporting long distances as fast as Minato could. He cannot teleport long distances with more than one person. As his version of Teleportation Jutsu consumes more Chakra and puts more burden on his body. While Minato has tackled these problems after taking inspiration from Tobirama. This might explain why he did not use teleportation Jutsu. -- I hope these things help. Love your story
ch 63 Flying Raijin Discussion
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
Doesn't even feel authentic enough.
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Nice Chapter
ch 80 Chapter 80 Real Madrid and Barcelona Are Both Unsettled
Celebrities · Johanssen10
Nice Chapter
ch 79 Chapter 79 Super, Super Huge Mistake!
Celebrities · Johanssen10
beautiful chapter
ch 70 Chapter 70: Ending the Bundesliga Giants' Winning Streak
Celebrities · Johanssen10
take care of yourself
(Sorry guys due to ramadan sometime I just can't gather enough energy to write, I'll be back to normal after ramadan)
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
ch 52 Chapter 51:- Special Chapter [XIX] - Rinne Festival
Anime & Comics · Salted_dragon
Nice Chapter
ch 46 Chapter 46: Another Goal, Lin Quan is the Real Ace!
Celebrities · Johanssen10
Well said
Female lead is still not decided but let's see, there are many snow leopard even the Wu sisters, the teammate of Master Shifu, and even the snow leopard in Crane's dojo. Even genderbend Peng, Tai Lung's niece.
Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
Bro this novel is good but please keep your rants at the end of the chapter. I don't usually comment but this is getting really bothering. After reading your rants, I lose interest in reading the chapter. I think many other readers feel the same.
ch 33 33. Undercurrents of Fate
Anime & Comics · Life_sa_Beach_
Thank you for the chapter.
ch 38 Chapter 38:- Special Chapter [VI]
Anime & Comics · Salted_dragon
I see. Then you can do it at your own pace. Compared to the first few chapters, I really feel that the quality of this novel has increased. Your writing has gotten better.
ch 14 Why, Just Why. Will The Problems Never End
Anime & Comics · RikuKage
ch 36 Chapter 36:- Special Chapter [IV]
Anime & Comics · Salted_dragon
I really appreciate you writing such long chapters. I just have one issue. I feel like you’re making each paragraphs too big. It’s difficult to read. Maybe try making them shorter.
ch 14 Why, Just Why. Will The Problems Never End
Anime & Comics · RikuKage
I have read about Male Haku and female Haku. I have read about the side character's mother becoming the MC's woman. In short, the number of times that I have read about this arc in so many novels is just too many to count.
Anime & Comics · Salted_dragon
I don't want to criticize the author. You're doing an excellent job. But this whole thing feels a little bit forced. Maybe I feel like this because I know Kakashi's background from the anime and have an emotional attachment to his character.
ch 63 Defeating Kakashi and current perks!
Naruto: Different Perks
Anime & Comics · Kaoski