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(Google translator) A good story, easy and pleasant to read, not annoying like most stories while reading, with all MCs (who are villains, manipulators, upstarts, etc.), here I like the character of the main character, then how he interacts with girls is also interesting, but it can still be improved a little (as an example, read "Long Live Summons", where the main character conquered the girls very cheerfully). There is nothing more to add, go ahead and do not leave this story, it is my favorite.

(Google translate) The idea in this story is good, but at certain points MC behaves like an inadequate person, take, for example, the scene when Rias's servants tried to contact him and invite him to talk, he even started scolding and insulting them (why?) It is quite normal that after this they wanted to beat him up and teach him a lesson (it is quite logical, other people in this situation would have done the same), from the actions of the MC it is clear that he himself went into conflict, but showed everything as if he was innocent, and try to intimidate him in every possible way (like the young masters in Chinese novels ghosts). Now another question, why does everyone have such hatred for Rias? In 7/10 of DxD fanfiction Rias is made an idiot and humiliated in every possible way, in 2/10 she is ignored or disposed of as a hindrance, and only in 1/10 MC has a normal romantic relationship with her. The way she shows herself in the original is quite normal for her status and what family she is in (9/10 people in her position would behave the same way, and possibly even worse, for example, like Riser or Diodora), in many other fan fictions according to others anime, too, there are often such cases, which depressing and killing the desire to continue reading.