I'm an aspiring writer, hoping to share my imagination with the world :)
2020-08-06 Joint United States
Accidentally added a " at the end of this sentence. Please delete when fixed, dear author :)
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LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
I believe it was still meant to be Griffin? Please delete when corrected / if I am incorrect, dear author :) :)
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Sci-fi · Typhlix
I always enjoyed reading mystery works, so I was excited to begin this one. I am reminded of Conan Doyle's style of writing with the short stories all somewhat connected together. (Compliment, btw, I love ACD) I PERSONALLY always enjoy the character being undescribed and ungendered, as my own bias, makes it easier for anybody on earth to put themselves in the MC's (or supporting character in this case!) shoes. My own MC's I go out of the way to never mention hair or eye color, race, etc. Again, my own bias there. The "mysteries" are spaced out enough for the reader to draw their own conclusions, something else I enjoy. I like your work, Author, keep it up!
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More of the strange "???" characters here. Sorry, author!!
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Action · CoolForniteplayer
When I copy/paste in my books, extra odd characters get thrown in there, you can see the two "??" symbols here. I really don't know where they come from, but you can edit them out, author, if you so please
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Action · CoolForniteplayer
Congratulations dear author! I'm so happy for you!
Overall a very interesting and good story. I can see where a couple of folks have left comments with suggestions for edits- they looked to be correct, and they'll make the story a little more polished. I enjoyed reading the prologue-type of introduction, and it really set up your story for success in the later chapters, very good use of that writing tactic. The characters' interactions are above average here on WN, and the suspense build up is perfect. Good job, and keep writing, dear author!
The Elusive Book Keeper
LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars