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ArgaNov01
female LV 2Just love what I've written! I'm a wandering author 😎 Authors in many places! 🙄😎
2020-08-07 Joint IndonesiaBadges 6
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Hello, congratulations on reading the second book with a female protagonist as the main character. After messing around with the male protagonist, I have more work to do. But, I loved it. I hope readers do too. Leave your encouragement for me for Cyril (Our MC in the previous story) and Eleonora (Beautiful woman without magic but scary here) Happy reading! PS. Forgive me for arrogantly judging my writing as perfect even though I'm a believer in "nothing in the world is perfect".
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You know, even in the real world I have trouble controlling my own life
"You should open your eyes and ears more, Knight Cyril. Not all nobles are as good as General Adelman. If you are still like that one day, you will be used and thrown away like garbage!" Jens warned.
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
You're right, I've already changed that one word almost four times
"Why did I wish for something unlucky just now?" Cyril whispered regretfully. He had intended to die. Even though he is fine even though he is poor. He just needs to find another job. Why should expect death?
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
Yes, as you said. That's why I won't back down just because someone else says my writing is bad.
"I-this--where?" asked Cyril scared.
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
I'll learn not to make you cry when u read it. I promise 😌
"Since it didn't come down, I intend to call it down for a meal!"
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
Don't say that, it makes me want to cry 😩
"Since it didn't come down, I intend to call it down for a meal!"
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
I'll take care of it right away. I actually wrote in a word document first before copying it and pasting it into the app. It could be that I accidentally copied the same chapter. Thank you for pointing out my mistake.
Adriana stared into the distance. Something was coming, and it was different. She couldn't quite put her finger on it, but it felt like her flat life was about to get a little more interesting. The rose petals in her palm fluttered in the wind.
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
someone sent me a picture of Cyril some time ago. I wear it in my head when i think of Cyril. Although his skin color is not quite the same as i imagined. But, i will probably make ot like this in the future. I don't know where the person got this image
[Hard jawline, sharp nose, sun-dark skin, shiny black hair, with brown pupils. Cyril Liechtense is a handsome mercenary knight]
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
What is this about Cyril's skin? His skin color is brown, the upper leftmost color in my image.
[Hard jawline, sharp nose, sun-dark skin, shiny black hair, with brown pupils. Cyril Liechtense is a handsome mercenary knight]
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
I will keep your advice in mind. I do have a lot to learn to make global readers satisfied with what I write. I apologize if you found many mistakes in my first story. Thank you for your advice! I really appreciate it. Notes: They say that my MC is naive. lol
Cyril once commented on this novel, why does the main character suffer so much to become successful? I mean, couldn't anything good has happened to him? His comment was blocked, of course. Are there any writers who like it when their work is criticized? Cyril as a reader was not angry.
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
Hi, I tried using pronouns, but some readers didn't understand the person I was referring to so I decided to just go back to Cyril. I will learn to do better so that you enjoy this story. Thank you for leaving a comment. Keep following this story and help me with your kind comments.
ch 0 1 Damn It!
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
Thank you for warning me. For some reason. For some parts I publish in a sleepy state. Your advice is greatly appreciated. I will immediately reread it as you wish. Keep following this story and encourage me to keep writing until the end.
"No one knows?" Algis looked annoyed. "What was the purpose of him being taken out?"
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
Thank you for leaving a comment. I've tried to fix it every time someone comments, but fixing it too often also makes it worse. I'll put your assessment in my notes and when I have time, I'll fix it all over again. Your suggestions are greatly appreciated.
ch 12 Black Forest
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
I'll check it out
"Since it didn't come down, I intend to call it down for a meal!"
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
Is it true? I'll check it out. I remember duplicates can't be in webnovel because it's detected by the system.
ch 0 5 Territory
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Fantasy · ArgaNov01
Hi Dear, it's nice to finally be able to write something for you again. You know, I'm really excited about how many people are reading my book. For me, the books I write are of course good. But, you guys are the judge in the end. I'm not a perfect writer. There are many mistakes in the writing that I could have made because of my selfishness. For all that, I apologize. Please enjoy this story. And see you in the next ML theme story. [img=coins]
I Got Killed and Woke Up as a Successor
Fantasy · ArgaNov01