Webnovel Author: Anonny_Anonymous - Novel Collection

I got second hand cringe from the MC smoking.

What kind of moron starts smoking in a post-apocalyptic setting? The impact on your health is so stupid. Not to mention, if you get addicted, you’re going to be hunting for cigarettes in the apocalyptic setting.

Kakashi became a Chunin at 6 years old. I’m surprised their sensei has the gall to act as if there is no precedent for them to advance.

I don’t like that you turned Naruto into a furry. That’s very cringe.

Why not control the 8 tails with the Mangekyo as well?

Danzo when he sees Sharingan.

Not to be a downer, but you have to remember at that point in time, less than 100 people were voting for the award. All it would take is a majority of members of the Hollywood Foreign Press Association to vote for Troy. It’s why it’s a much less prestigious award than the Oscars or even the Emmys. Speaking of Emmys, the MC should be eligible for an Emmy for his TV movie.

This trash AI needs to be wiped clean. Forcing you to adopt kids? Locking a door, injuring you? Letting strangers walk into your sanctuary? And why is it that in 99.99% of fics, the MC always acquires female offspring (through adoption or otherwise)? Even in this case, all 4 kids are female when statistically, at least one of them should be male. Authors have such a strong aversion to males, I guess.

Why doesn’t this idiot have forcefield barriers and other methods of protecting the entrance to his Tardis?

I would have kept telekinesis. I’m fine with the intelligence increase. The lifespan increase isn’t necessary. With his new intelligence, he can just invent something like transferring his mind into a cloned body, de-aging machine, digitizing his consciousness and becoming an AI and becoming like Ultron, using biological clones as additional backups.

With cleave and dismantle, he can allegedly even sever concepts. If he trains it enough, he can probably chop off a piece when he visits her mind in the astral plane.

1) Martian Manhunter would have been OP in this world. Especially if he can become a burning Martian. He likely could have used psychics to help him remove the fire weakness and unlock burning Martian state. 2) I don’t like the limit on the copying power. 3) I think the MC should have a cursed spirit like Rika to protect him.

Cool. Thanks for the update.

Thanks for the chapter.

Dumb to destroy the fortress. He should have stored it away. Now, he has to waste tons of resources to build one from scratch in the future.

If the MC’s name is so troublesome to fully type out every time, maybe you should take that as a hint to change the MC’s name to something better than the trash name you chose.

The MC’s name sucks. I hate both the first and last name.

So, it’s just an OC with no meta knowledge? Disappointing.

1) He shouldn’t have to owe ANYTHING to Demeter. He’s not responsible for the collateral damage. The MC is a beta male for caving in. 2) The cost items in the store is ridiculous. 3) Wasting 100,000 souls on a consumable good? 4) Why do so many system fics have the authors have their MCs waste so many points (or system currencies) on consumables? Ugh. So stupid.

This chapter is skippable.