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its good . you should give it a try...........................................................................................................................................................................................

1.Arrogant Young Master Template A Variation 4 2.Tree of Aeons these 2 novels were one of my early reads .. these 2 have most character depth and world building and style .. with slow progression.(especially the 2nd one). In a good way your story has potential and you are using it . but writing is a bit rough . like dialogue between characters. If you have time try these novels on "royalroad". and thanks for writing this story..

generally slow paced novels are considered demerit's but for this novel author took time to explore the characters personality. It has stability of updates . as for story development it passes with 5/5.As for world background, we are still learning about the world .as it would be revealed later .

its good novel. it keeps balance between logic and story progression. it has lot of potential for improvement . for example switching pov more often or increasing dialogs between characters.

do you know reason why it spottedupdating?

read more chapter. there is reason for it. spoiler its revealed that system was not meant for him . system is his enemy's tool. it gets really interesting later

read more chapter. there is reason for it. spoiler its revealed that system was not meant for him . system is his enemy's tool. it gets really interesting later

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keep it up i like it.......................................................................................................

i am giving it a try . thanks for recommending

i just started reading this novel and its already in my fav list..................................................................................................

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