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Helo! I am a 5 yrs old manly loli Should I read this... Ngl.. I haven't read it yet cuz I personally dislike stories that are all about R-18 stuff but their are many other men of culture who like these....and want it... .So 5 stars (a review from a fellow degenerate)

This story got some real potential and if executed properly it could be extremely immersive. The characters are good but sometimes they act differently than what they usually behave but overall it's good. And the best aspect of the story is its world building. It genuinely feels like a d&d world where everything around the main character is constantly moving in its own pace and some events doesn't always revolve around the protagonist. The author has done a good job in expressing the world. A good read if you are looking for something more immersive.

I really liked how you shaped the world and it feels pretty new. Most of the web novels gives the same old Chinese novel vibes which is annoying but this one is definitely different from others and doesn't feel Chinese at all. I would definitely recommend it to anyone else that is bored of the annoying Chinese vibes.

The story is good except for the fact that some characters feel really shallow. Spoiler alert* . . . For example - Allen Mccarthy is a killer that kills for money(he is a mercenary) but he shows no remorse in doing what he does. His character design is quite illogical. The best example of mercenary-type character would be kiritsugu emiya from Fate zero. His character development was pretty tragic and his mental growth was something that happens to someone who has been killing their entire life. Allen Mccarthy perhaps could be a battle maniac who kills for fun....... If so he behaves a little like someone who cares for other. . . . If you agree with me just fix this character a little bit.... Though I haven't read past the first 7 chapters. Hopefully his character development would be fun and logical. Though I liked Hiro sasaki.... He has a good character background that makes a little sense and his carefree personality is a little bit consistent.