Old fanfic writer who can't write in chinese. Discord: xuemao
2021-07-21 Joint Canada
nah well, maybe not yet
"At the very least, I will focus on cultivation enough so that I can protect her." Yu Tian promised himself.
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This is a big hint towards his second martial spirit actually
"Ugh." Frustrated, Yu Tian grabbed the box and opened it again. He started stuffing all of its contents down his mouth, chewing furiously.
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basically a unit of weight measurement like pounds or kilos
"Dou Generals can perform advanced techniques, with enhanced physical strength around 3000 jin." Yan Yu continued. "After Dou General is War Master, capable of condensing Qi into armour. Then War Grandmaster, capable of flying by the increased manipulation of the Qi around the body."
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doubt
"He was born on this rainy day, so I want to use Yu. One day I hope he can ascend to the heavens, so let's call him Yu Tian." She finally decided.
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kekega
Bless
ok bro
I also saw how many of you didn't want Li Mei Ling to die. Truthfully, I was going to write her off as dead which then gives Yu Tian to have the motivation for revenge and step on a darker path earlier on.
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Thank you for reading ;w;
ch 29 Reaping Benefits
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The plot and worldbuilding is great, just some awkward formatting but I don't find it that offputting personally. Just some suggestions but yea.
Ce livre a été supprimé.
Thank you, should be when the new WSA comes out.
ch 27 A Fortuitous Encounter?
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what the fak
ch 0 1 The Frustrated Virgin God
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I mean I can always change it to big chest and bum instead but I want BAGS to be more serious in some areas and not completely focus on humour, so it's more or less writing style
Beside him sat a beautiful figure who swung her legs carefreely on the side of the cliff. Her body was slender and she had curves in all the right places. Both of them were also dressed in spotless white robes that seemed nearly identical.
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Thanks
ch 26 Practicing Qi Techniques
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youre welcome
ch 26 Practicing Qi Techniques
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Chapter 23 I might just outright delete because it fucks up too many things. I thought some explanation might be good but it also kind of spoils the later stuff too much. Thanks for reading regardless
ch 23 Another Glimpse of a Forgotten Past
Being a God Sucked, so I Quit
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