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male LV 4I read probably way too much but my standards are also exacting so if I complained about your book, I stand by my opinion because I also probably gave you a break down on why I didn't like it.
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only on rare occasions where she needed to pick something up off the floor...
Since then, the brunette had learned to hover within a millimeter or less of the ground and move just like everyone else. Only on rare occasions where she needed to pick something up and touch the floor did Noble allow herself the briefest moment of excruciating pain to retrieve what was lost.
The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
Book&Literature · NobleQueenBee
Here it is.
Since then, the brunette had learned to hover within a millimeter or less of the ground and move just like everyone else. Only on rare occasions where she needed to pick something up and touch the floor did Noble allow herself the briefest moment of excruciating pain to retrieve what was lost.
The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
Book&Literature · NobleQueenBee
wasn't there just something about having to touch the floor to retrieve fallen objects?
"Don't worry, sweetheart. Allow me." Even as Noble spoke, the five small ramekins floated from the low counter through the air and made their way next to each bowl.
The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
Book&Literature · NobleQueenBee
this cliffhanger is badly placed. you gave us too much information and very little uncertainty.
AN: I'm genuinely not sure about how I handled this interaction. I know it's not over, but there was a lot more that I wanted to put here. I know that Dumbledore's behaviour is a bit out of character, but there is a reason for it that you'll see in the next chapter. On the bright side, I'm really looking forward to writing the fight scene. As always, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
And here we have the ignoramus. Karen doesn't have a kekkei genkai huh? What the hell is that super special Chakra that heals people when they chew on her then? Oh, I guess you think Super Special abilities don't qualify as kekkei genkai? Abilities like dojutsus, and Chakra absorbers? Tell me, what is her super special healing Chakra that was the whole reason her mother died and she was fated to die playing doctor/ human sacrifice if not a kekkei genkai? Oh, and do me a favor while you're at it, tell me, since turn around is fair play and all, how did me belittling you make you feel? Good? good.
Seeing the change, he was shocked, as he knew this was an ability that even very few pureblooded Uzumaki could have.
Naruto: The Strongest Senju
Anime & Comics · Kingkillerdj2023
it should have been 2 fragments. classes give 1 extra fragment while tiers are multiplicative. for example, a dormant beast killing an unholy titan would yield 448 fragments. if I understand it right, tiers reward 2 to the power of however many levels higher the kill was, classes just a flat multiplier 1 through 7. a fallen beast is worth 4 shards each right now, awakened 2. now that's different for normal awakened because they have soul cores and they absorb a fraction of the soul fragments of enemies they slay. THIS IS THE SPECIFIC REASON, ALONG WITH THE USE OF SOUL SHARDS, WHY NEPHIS PROGRESSES SO MUCH FASTER THAN SUNNY.
(A/N- I'll be honest I don't know how I'm gonna do this part im gonna need someones help, for now that looks about right)
Shadow slave: A Shadows Friend
Book&Literature · Dashkins74
I hate its design personally. it would have been better with the hoop detached from itself instead of part of it's chest. Say it rested in an indent or as a bangle or crown of sorts that it could take out/off and manipulate with its arms or something. As part of a chest though... it just looks goofy.
I was not sure if I wanted to see Hoopa show up in front of me someday and I definitely did not want to think about it right now, so I simply told Tatsumaki that it was possible before changing the topic to something different.
Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
Anime & Comics · Azrail93
of heckin course he would weasel his way into adjuticating the tournament.
The entire hall stood silent at the man's ominous warning before he nodded to himself and continued, "With that out of the way, I believe it's time for us to talk about the specifics of the tournament. As you probably know, there will be seven different tasks, each one taking place in a different school. Madame Maxime, who has graciously invited us into this prestigious institution will announce the first task after I am done with my announcements, so I will leave the details to her. Each task can have one or multiple champions and the winner of each task will receive a very special prize which will be revealed with the tasks are announced. You will be scored with a score out of ten, from each of our expert judges, culminating in a score out of fifty. Now, to introduce our judges which will remain until the end of the tournament."
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
Book&Literature · athass_prkr
in that case shouldn't he be worried that they will perform the impure world reincarnation themselves? did he even get rid of all of inoichi's DNA?
Of course, there's also the possibility that when the dead walk among the living again, some people recognize them. No matter, but I'm not going to revive Inoichi no matter how much the Yamanaka clan asks if Shikaku connects the dots and informs them. Not only because of what he did but because then the information for which he died would fall into Konoha's hands.
Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life
Anime & Comics · Cadenadeaventuras
I hope he doesn't. he's been a little too shameless recently and doesn't understand the immensity of mt. tai
"Stuff like this can happen, and I don't think that it will change the end result. I'm going to leave with my Badge regardless. Lucario breaking through to the platinum stage won't change that," I continued cooly. Stephanie's smile widened at my words and she actually released a chuckle. "I like your confidence. We'll see how long you can keep that confidence of yours," she replied, putting an end to this little interlude. Our Pokemon had temporarily put a stop to their battle while Stephanie and I had our little exchange, but both remained poised for action the whole time.
Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
Anime & Comics · Azrail93
Great fight. Has mikhail not figured out how to get his gyarados' to fly yet?
ch 679 CH59 (673), First Gym Battle (6)
Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
Anime & Comics · Azrail93
I was really hoping Mothra would pull out her size manipulation to perform a super-sized seismic toss. Grab the mon, spin in mid air while supersizing for extra leverage, and just bury that sucker 20 feet into the ground. Conservation of momentum would make that move soooooo powerful
ch 678 CH58 (672), First Gym Battle (5)
Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
Anime & Comics · Azrail93
bro... don't leave me hanging
ch 0 1 Convergence of Magic: The Overlord X Harry Potter
Convergence of Magic: The Overlord X Harry Potter
Book&Literature · Kart_Fiction
golden finger is super special advantage that lasts throughout fic but author just wails on the mc at the start with super oppressive circumstances, basically turning the world against them to avoid a boring born as a God read. this start can be considered wealthy person gets amnesia/ stranded in a strange land with a portion of their resources. not a golden finger, just a blessed start.
Looking further through the crates, Pete found a few more things like two luxury sleeping bags, a tent that sadly had a rather large hole pierced through and through the folded up fabric and lastly a whole bunch of evolution stones. Some were cracked and, therefore, mostly unusable depending on the type, but he still made it out of the shipment with every kind of stone. Fire stones were the most prominent, and even a King's Rock was among the items.
Pokemon: A life worth living
Video Games · Nuclide
I hate this trope, especially in fics with the writing quality of your average cultivation novel.
The teacher waited a moment, to see whether Lucas wanted to add something else or not. Not seeing any indication of him doing so Mr Cruson said, "Short and precise, wonderfull. I believe you will make a phenomenal scientist. The next one is." Looking down on his student list, he turned to a little girl with a long mane of bushy brown hair and large front teeth. Taking the gesture as a cue she began, "My name is Hermione Granger, I like to read and learn new things and I want to be a scientist as well."
Harry Potter: outlier
Book&Literature · ViolentCloud
parchment is made from animal skins and while not immune to water damage, far more durable than paper.
It can kill nine of every ten men. It causes the infected to bleed copiously from every body orifice, their skin shredding like wet parchment.
Got Stuck in Overlord as a NPC, Now I'm in Sothoryos?!
Anime & Comics · Reyviel_Faesly
its not mathematically possible seeing as they were trading off nights and shelter got the first night
"Besides, Esdeath slept with you one more than me! I demand to sleep with you today!" "THAT'S BULLSHIT AND YOU KNOW IT, SHALLTEAR!" The ice Queen roared with fury at the vampire's statement. "I'LL RIP YOU DAMN JAW OFF YOUR FACE, BLUE BITCH!" Shalltear roared back.
Overlord: Reborn as an NPC
Anime & Comics · Delusion10
Second line, 13th paragraph from the bottom says something along the lines of "Only when she needs to pick something up and touch the floor to retrieve what was lost does she allow a moment of pain" or something like that.
"Don't worry, sweetheart. Allow me." Even as Noble spoke, the five small ramekins floated from the low counter through the air and made their way next to each bowl.
The Noble Queen-A Shadow Slave Fanfic
Book&Literature · NobleQueenBee