A story of Tobias. And a deep one, on top of that. Conspiracy, killing, and everything joined together to create a mystery that would make you read twice, and yet understand a little. Honestly speaking, it gave me the Hajime Kindaichi's vibe, yet very mysterious at the same time. I was made to reread the entire thing again, just because I thought I missed something. The mother, the father, the brother, all of them. Unless you sat tight on the sofa and read it, be prepared to be lost. Trust me, you'll love getting lost... I wouldn't tell others how far I went if I were you, young reader... Thread with care... (This is my previous review before the author re-loaded his story to an even better version. I demand a fast update, author. Fast update. If you don't mind, I am available via PM. Dun hesitate to send me all of them as my boxing day gift, thanks in advance)
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 It Was A Good Day, Until It Wasn't...
Fantasy · Jeri_
Obviously, there's a point why he drawn the one that everyone considered trash. What if, the coffee we thought was best wasn't arabica, but it was made for us to believe? What if, being vegan is actually to reduce the operating cost for the grocer? What if, they told us to use bidet because the cost to make paper was too high nowadays? Not everything told to you was truth, and that's including my spoilers. I maybe enjoy bullying the MC?
(Oh my... The misfortune flag really hits me with the lowest possible draw...)
Eastern · TuXueXiaoCanYong
A story of Tobias. And a deep one, on top of that. Conspiracy, killing, and everything joined together to create a mystery that would make you read twice, and yet understand a little. Honestly speaking, it gave me the Hajime Kindaichi's vibe, yet very mysterious at the same time. I was made to reread the entire thing again, just because I thought I missed something. The mother, the father, the brother, all of them. Unless you sat tight on the sofa and read it, be prepared to be lost. Trust me, you'll love getting lost... I wouldn't tell others how far I went if I were you, young reader... Thread with care...
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Ahh.... Fellow sane hooman... Do you save your families as names to avoid bad stuff happens too?
Furthermore, as a boomer, he had the bad habit of remembering their numbers instead of searching in the contact book. In his opinion, something like this was more meaningful, according to his twisted view.
Eastern · TuXueXiaoCanYong
all corrected. The comment might be lost because the sentence got edited. Thank you.
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Eastern · TuXueXiaoCanYong
Also, him behaving like a lil virgin teenager is just for now, especially you cant include smexy stuff before contracted and going premium. Wouldn't wanna jeopadize my chance for contract. And most importantly, its potraying your author's lifelong dream. Nothing is better than taking some sweet advantage without being too pervert. You had to understand that pervert at a apex is aint pervert even if you're a pervert! LEARN! FELLOW DAOIST! LEARN!!!
ch 0 6 Chapter 10: Spending 1000 Spiritual Coins
Eastern · TuXueXiaoCanYong
Other people's Villain : Kill all the newbs, Slap all the haters, Kick all the doods, and sleep all da gurls. - Your Author's Villain definition: As long it potray I am a man with class, so what if I play with Minglan's peaks in pretense, bullied my classmates when I feel like doing so, or perhaps, extort the other party for all their wealth when I feel like it? (OOPS, no more of spoilers alert) Anyway, my villain aint shallow. That royal duke dad of his is quite irresponsible rite, but aint that norm to some normal richie families? Nothing to be bad about. It may be a prelude to some beechslaps later, like when the country fk up?
ch 0 6 Chapter 10: Spending 1000 Spiritual Coins
Eastern · TuXueXiaoCanYong
I was thinking of doing a reincarnation again and again for this story, where Valerian will keep reincarnated across ages from death. But naturally, I hope I could do this with my limited writing skills. Thanks for the review.
NEXUS: Forgeworld
Fantasy · TuXueXiaoCanYong