Little_El

Too much unnecessary and unrealistic drama, she comes up with information out of nowhere that she certainly didn't know in her past life, but suddenly she knows everything and remembers things that are totally banal for someone who has lived such an exciting life.

I gave up, I'm tired of pointing out in every chapter that MC is not beautiful.

The beginning, the system, the descriptions of his poverty-stricken situation... a work of art, he had more logic than many other MCs, then came this GPU thing he built and the story collapsed, all the realism was lost, all his intelligence said goodbye and gave way to plot armor, it became totally unrealistic. We were suddenly disconnected from the fantasy element of the story. For my part, it's impossible to go on, all I can see is the unrealism of the guy's idiotic actions. I feel like crying a little because I was so excited when I read the beginning and it got ruined.

Frankly the concept is great, the beginning is very good, superpowers, Wonderful and interesting worlds, then he introduced firearms in the Middle Ages, at that point I started to skip chapters to avoid all that concerns medieval soldiers with firearms (eww) second point I had to skip are these love relationships, with the housekeeper? zero personality, she's boring, her presence useless, there's also the other girl Maya, frankly with a good development, their story could have become dreamy but the author isn't good at it. It's as if the author wants to build a Harem for herself, which would spoil everything. Anyway , Good story but no more

Hello. Can you please give me the name and author of the original story?

So many clichés and lack of information. the background is a real mishmash, information that contradicts, clichés really unnecessary. the author tries to make the book mysterious but it is a real Chaos.

Good start, I loved that the author took time to develop the story and the coming of the system. The FMC is not a typical modern woman educator. She's someone who lived through the 80s and 2000s, the system is consistent, not at all intrusive but the ML, this guy makes me uncomfortable. I'm on chapter 320 and I've decided to stop because every time he appears with the FMC I'm disgusted. It may not be a problem for other people but I'm very sensitive to this sort of thing. ML has known FMC since she was six and by the time the girl is 15/16, the way he behaves with her becomes weird, it's an adult in his twenties faced with a teenager as described who still has baby fat on his cheek. I don't care if she's got a crush on him, he seems to be grooming her to be his little wife, he's moved in with FMC who's 16, whom he met when she was 6 without asking her permission, a girl in this period where it's so hard for a woman, where purity is very important, a man has moved in just like that without thinking about her. Anyway, I've given up. I hate that guy.