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It's unrealistic. She's a foreigner who can't leave the village to make merits in the war, while at the time, jinchurki were seen as atomic bombs to be released, which isn't conducive to a stable leader. The other jinchuriki kage had control of their tailed beasts, (Naruto, Gaara, Yagura) I also assumed her desire to become hokage was to fit into the village, which she no longer needed that validation as an adult.
"My name is Kushina Uzumaki, and my dream is to become the first female Hokage of this village!"
Naruto: Rebirth of Namikaze Minato
Anime & Comics · electronatom
yeah, should just be "what is" at the end.
"...often what is not spoken is just as important as what is not."
DUNE-A False Haerach-(SI into brother of Irulan)
Movies · Drkest
The most annoying of those fights, was easily the Joker. The guy was genuinely insane, and while she would have loved to end his life then and there, she couldn't exactly do that with Bruce and Dick right there. Thus, she resigned herself to killing him when they weren't there.
SpiderGwen: I have a system?!
Anime & Comics · ArtoriaPendragon_
"Kidou Kun, Why did you start this so late?" Orochimaru asked as he looked at Kidou, who shrugged in response and said, "I don't know, must have been something or maybe I awakened some kind of Kekkai Genkai."
Multiple Talents in Naruto World
Anime & Comics · Logical_Dot
"As for taking large steps, it's more like jumping and running at the same time."
Multiple Talents in Naruto World
Anime & Comics · Logical_Dot
When you have a hammer in your hand, everything looks like a nail.
Konoha: Sealing Jutsu Sensei of Ninja Academy
Anime & Comics · ReidAstrea
Gotta go to hogwarts.
Yes, Natsuhiko wanted to become a sensei not to educate, but for the books in the Academy's library.
Konoha: Sealing Jutsu Sensei of Ninja Academy
Anime & Comics · ReidAstrea
"Isn't this a bit too coincidental?"
Naruto: Hidden Mist's Great Blacksmith
Anime & Comics · lookar
don't really see the issue with just saying all dead people turn into walkers. Its actually miraculous the Atlanta group never witnessed it before the cdc.
Oh, right. I didn't shoot the skinny one in the head. Time to play stupid.
The Walking Dead: Warlord
TV · Sorrest
Religion, mob mentality, conditioning. 10,000 years of religious teaching and threat of death for having an AI. When you see someone get killed by a mob for having an AI, you probably won't pick up siri any time soon, even if it isn't a thinking machine.
It would have killed anyone, yet he persisted. He continued to torture himself for them. For their cause, and so she would support him. She would never let him fall. Even at her own cost, it was the only thing she could do.
DUNE-A False Haerach-(SI into brother of Irulan)
Movies · Drkest
Paul had mentat training, which essentially turns a human into a super computer. Wasnt shown in the movies, but its what the guy who calculated the cost of the guilds trip did.
It would have killed anyone, yet he persisted. He continued to torture himself for them. For their cause, and so she would support him. She would never let him fall. Even at her own cost, it was the only thing she could do.
DUNE-A False Haerach-(SI into brother of Irulan)
Movies · Drkest
It took 1 hour for sarthak to calm down and understand his situation,then cried for 1 hour in sadness, because he will not be able to see his parents again and wish them to live happily and without any worries,then he walked in the kitchen washed his face and then sat on the study chair and went through the memories of this new life.His Name was Sarusakku Tategami.He was an orphan whose parents died in the kyubi attack and left him alone.he got there inheritance which is decent as they were both jounin's.He was 13 year old and was assigned to the ninja corps as he failed the genin test today.He looked like a young Anos Voldigoad .He sighed then looked at the screen in front of him.{Sarusakku means Sarthak in Japanese}
Naruto: Eye System
Anime & Comics · SarusakkuKM17
He quickly got up to dodge, but the beams, as if guided by something, changed direction in the air.
Almost Invincible (Invincible SI)
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
I think its kassadins silence ability from league of legends. Stops you from casting spells for 1s.
- [Purification], [Void Orb]
Harry Potter: Starting Over at Hogwarts
Book&Literature · IHaveNoNamingSense
packed it away... f
The dwarves, who used to be very meticulous with their equipment, now hurriedly packed it away in their packs.
Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
Repeated 'began' right next to eachother. A lengthy sentence (at the end) that doesn't add new info. All this was witnessed by little Bilbo, who had hidden behind a rock during the attack. With trembling hands, he began to absentmindedly pack his belongings. He had wanted to fight bravely against the orcs, but fear won out this time. You could make it a thought as well. All this was witnessed by little Bilbo, who had hidden behind a rock during the attack. 'I wanted to fight bravely like Aldren and the dwarves, but... I can't, im a coward, just as they say.' Bilbo thought as he packed his belongings with trembling hands.
All this was watched by little Bilbo, who had hidden behind a rock when the attack began. With trembling hands, he began to put his things away. At first he wanted to fight bravely against the orcs, but fear won out this time, so he had no choice but to hide.
Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
packed it away in their packs. The "packs" isn't nessasary, and repeated words can make a sentence feel clunky, we can work it out. The dwarves who used to be very meticulous with their equipment, now hurriedly packed away it away. If you want to add more to it, try... now squirreled away their belongings with fervour. now shoved their belongings haphazardly into their bags. (or packs if you like)
The dwarves, who used to be very meticulous with their equipment, now hurriedly packed it away in their packs.
Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
remove repeated phrases in the same sentence or paragraph like "as we". Thorin said as he sat down to recover from the sudden attack. (can shorten it) Thorin said as he sat down to catch his breath from the sudden attack which had tired him out. (or keep the whole meaning)
"Orcs! And there were too many of them to be just a scouting party," Thorin said as he sat down to catch his breath, as he was a bit tired from the sudden attack.
Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
"Ah, my eyes, my eyes..." It was Naruto's first time killing someone, and he had no experience. Blood sprayed on his face and clothes. It was a shocking scene, but when Naruto started yelling and covering his eyes, everyone snapped out of it.
Naruto-SoulFusion
Anime & Comics · The_SaadKhan
sometimes the humor is so flat i forget to laugh at an actually good joke when it appears.
"No need to dig, actually, I was abducted by aliens as a child…"
Hunting in Hollywood
Celebrities · INIT