It's been five years since I started reading, three years on Webnovel, and I write as a hobby, I especially like fan fics, western and Eastern fantasy as well as system novels. Anime and Manga Too.
2022-03-15 Joint Global
Also, the entire premise of the fic is for the MC to be prepared in advance for the events of the show, having him go down with the others would defeat the whole purpose and premise of the fic
The fun method, directly joining the hundred. That way he can live and interact with his favorite characters, get closer to those he wants to fuc-- be his wives, and experience their hardship as his own.
TV · Silver_Chaos77
I can recognise criticism when I see it, this isn't it, and it's common knowledge this is a fan fic as per the tag, you don't have to go on a whole self Monologue about it. I don't like what I did with the story progression, but the opening I will defend, as it's something unique and creative, not the same copy pasted formula, which you should appreciate but you clearly live in your own little world
The fun method, directly joining the hundred. That way he can live and interact with his favorite characters, get closer to those he wants to fuc-- be his wives, and experience their hardship as his own.
TV · Silver_Chaos77
Ever heard of , show not tell? At least have him use his skills in the fights, they are always underwhelming, he doesn't use his skills for all the hype that was put into them.
Now that I generally know my new abilities I decide to get ready to leave my dimension.
Anime & Comics · theogbasilisk
50 paragraph power up info dump incoming 😞
Best to learn what changed as soon as possible.
Anime & Comics · theogbasilisk
Well.....then why couldn't he have done that with ALL is attacks....
However instead of just firing it at him like normal I use Limitless to teleport behind it and before he can react I fire it.
Anime & Comics · theogbasilisk
I'm not going to lie, this feels like it was written using chat gpt or something, if not I apologise, but nobody other than a 900 year old Sage speaks like that, especially not a reincarnated soul from modern days.
Dick noted the change in options. "Gone are the previous choices of princesses, noble daughters, succubi, and forest elves," he observed, preparing to make his selection.
Fantasy · Rqmk
Fixed~ Thanks for pointing it out ♡
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TV · Silver_Chaos77
This is why I hate writing in first person, some dumba**es assume it's a SI
I mean, did you not bother to understand anything while reading, all these advantages are removable by evolution, as was stated, I know it's your fetish to insult everything you read from your comment history, but go touch grass fam.
ch 0 4 No Longer Human
TV · Silver_Chaos77
I'm cooking up a new chapter :3
ch 31 A Gory Fight
TV · Silver_Chaos77
Weren't they all identical
Ethan spotted a faint golden light in the distance, flickering in and out like a star.
Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck
It wouldn't work with the story's premise. The entire Advanced Preparation would be useless. I don't need to copy every other The 100 fanfic beginning. This is MY STORY which I wanted to have a unique opening.....great conversation
The fun method, directly joining the hundred. That way he can live and interact with his favorite characters, get closer to those he wants to fuc-- be his wives, and experience their hardship as his own.
TV · Silver_Chaos77
Yaay, new chapter 👏👏👏
ch 82 Chapter 82: Walpurgis Banquet II [Part 7]
Anime & Comics · TheRandomMe
It's called logic, the fic isn't even 30 chapters in. It stands to reason that ANYONE who was an avid fan of the show and actually got to their world would want to meet them, criticizing that is just stupid. Especially since the storyline revolves around them. It's what he does afterwards that counts.
The 100: Advanced Preparation
TV · Silver_Chaos77