DJabba

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2022-04-21 Joint United Kingdom
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DJabba
DJabba
3 months ago
Posted

One of my favorite stories. Its not perfect with some grammar and sentence errors, like dialogues not being clear on who said it. Probably needs a beta reader. But the premise, story telling, and world building more than makes this a worthwhile read.

DJabba
DJabba
7 months ago
Commented

Bro I can tell you've been using ChatGPT or some AI to write a huge portion of your more recent chapters. This story used to be good early on when your were writing everything. But now it's just really hard to read, too flowery and has no soul (signature authors writing style). AI should only be used as a tool for writing, not for writing the whole chapter.

DJabba
DJabba
9 months ago
Commented

At this point I wouldn't be surprised if Horizon took Mt Fuji and dropped it on Tokyo

DJabba
DJabba
DJabba
9 months ago
Commented

Why do I feel like Horizon had something to do with this 🤔 he did say this trial would end by the end of the day.

DJabba
DJabba
9 months ago
Replied to DJabba

And I was in a Catholic School 💀

DJabba
DJabba
9 months ago
Replied to Skibidirizz

There were 3 in my year...

DJabba
DJabba
9 months ago
Commented

These people don't get the gravity of the situation. Probably not even Prime Might could have ended Gigantomachia. In fact if All Might does show up to the trial that's all he would have to say to silence the opposition, doesn't even have to outright support Horizon.

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DJabba
DJabba
9 months ago
Commented

Korean Novel: I Was Mistaken as a Monstrous Genius Actor Quiet funny and entertaining. A good read.

DJabba
DJabba
9 months ago
Replied to blazuki

Good luck

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