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LV 1時は、待たない。 Knowledge is power and science is magic. <3
2022-05-05 Joint United StatesBadges 6
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Just wanted to say, Zero is hands down my favorite. Leave my boy alone. :) Besides some grammar and punctuation issues, this story has a lot of potential. The plot is interesting, the characters are diverse (Hello, Dina <3), and the world building is intriguing. I would definitely give it a read!
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Commented An interesting concept! If you have time, I would go back and edit some basic grammar such as punctuation and name capitalization. Small things like that will help keep readers. :)
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The synopsis catches your attention quickly, while the story continues to keep your interest chapter to chapter. This author's writing style is unique, and although there is small grammar errors here and there, the charm of the story shines through. Deff worth a read.
The shadow of dead.
Fantasy · Surbhi_mithil