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I like The Story... but 2 things ruin the whole novel for me.. 1st its the Girlfriend june... she Just doesn't feel right with the story2nd the MC is dipping into many projects at the Same time which slows the movie projects down a Lot... like Author is deliberately trying to slow the introduction of MCU...

funk u author..... rocket as Tony's son... yuck

I like the story very much.. there are some plot holes and the Ending is very abrupt.. but the overall story is good... There are no racism and nationalism in the story.. The MC fuck the whole world including China... just fucks the north America more.... but still The Origin and mechanism of USB was not explained its a shame

plz tell me that it isn't dropped..!!!!!!??

Good Concept but shit Story execution.. look i Know it's kinda fun to SI but you have to know that Whole Mahmoud Shaheed persona doesn't match well with the Story.... it is what it is...... too much emotional drama And MC is dumb as shit... I tried reading it 3 times but always dropped it in the middle... too much cringe for me... And MC doesn't even know about marvel... if it's a SI and you don't even know the basic MCU plot then what's the Point of having transmigration/reincarnation... just give Omnitrix to a random dude in marvel and be done with it

A very good story... i think the author nerfed him because by the time cannon starts he will be too OP... but i think author could have made it so he will be out of commission for a while and let him out before cannon like maybe throwing him in some dimension by a failed hydra experiment or by aghata... still the story is good... plz author sama update more quickly

it started good but shit hit the fan real fast... come on Man even if this fic is just for practice try to put some real effort... i m not asking you to follow canon but at least make the world building and character building believable...

its a good fic... there could be more world hopping adventures though

This is completely bulshit... how many flashbacks did the author put in almost every chapter.. it destroyed the flow of novel... Even the character development is bullshit, almost everyone knows he is from the future and man at least complete the story of Naruto Shippuden before you think after other things