YourMoMsmybich

YourMoMsmybich

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YourMoMsmybich
YourMoMsmybich
1 months ago
Posted

See there 's a few reasons that this story is flip : 1, poor writing quality 2, not being able to manage various character povs 3, not researching the original material like - characters and their personalities from the series 4, bad integration of mc in the story ...... there are more so you can read but it's not worth it .

YourMoMsmybich
YourMoMsmybich
1 months ago
Commented

in the first place this whole, like amy ,thing is kind of weird and seems so forced 😕. Genuine question would a person fall in love with someone so deeply in just 3 days that they are concerned about well-being of someone who just a few moments ago slaughtered a whole lot of monsters ?? even love at first sight has its limits bro.....

" Itachi! " - She called, eyes wide, voice cracking with panic.

In The Walking Dead as Itachi Uchiha ?! (TWD)

In The Walking Dead as Itachi Uchiha ?! (TWD)

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YourMoMsmybich
YourMoMsmybich
1 months ago
Posted

Extremely well written and engaging novel. I hope this one reaches more than thousand chapters. Please support the author 🐱. Translation is great , no major or minor mishaps. Updating stability is fine too 3 chaps a day. Story development is progressive . Character design is good but I sometimes feel mc shows himself above humans while interacting with his servants World background is expansive.