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Overly fluffed word count, there’s no way in heck I’ll ever pay for chapters when I feel this cheated already, easily able to skip paragraphs and the story not have progressed much at all

Very dry boring book with way too much explanation and no story progression, you can literally skip paragraphs and sometimes even chapters and nothing significant has changed

Ridiculous advertisements that shouldn’t be there and chapter locks at chapter 17 is just shameless, most of the books on WN at least lock around 40, locking it that early leaves a very bad impression when someone is just getting into the book doesn’t even give them the chance to get hooked and start buying chapters

Amazingly good, waiting for new chapters is agonizing 😮‍💨