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Bored -> boring
Huang Bai Xing's eyes flashed. Interesting! This trip to the secret world won't be too bored.
Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
Fantasy · Littlecarrot
Poster -> posture
Huang Bai Xing dressed in the exquisite white hanfu, showing her elegant poster. Her expression was cold, but that didn't affect her beautiful face at all. She looked like a fairy descended from the fairy world.
Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
Fantasy · Littlecarrot
Enthusiastic -> enthusiasm
Suddenly, Wang Pei Zhi who was greeting Shenlian YingYue with enthusiastic, felt cold behind his back.
Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
Fantasy · Littlecarrot
"I don't mind comparing myself with Senior Brother YuZe." The woman didn't care. Her eyes showed the heart emotion. ♥
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Fantasy · Littlecarrot
That would be a valid point if it weren’t for the fact that the heroine is an entitled narcissist with power and an attitude towards beautiful men that puts any Pokémon trainer to shame 🤔😅
Perhaps, because she advanced to the Nascent Soul realm, that's why her skin looked whiter and fairer. Well, never mind, as long as her alluring face didn't show up to startle the ghosts and beasts.
Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
Fantasy · Littlecarrot
Fascinating -> fascinated
"Are you fascinating by my beauty?" Su LanFei wrapped her hand against Shenlian YingYue's shoulder and leaned her beautiful face over.
Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
Fantasy · Littlecarrot
Fort -> forth
Her sect's hanfu set off her graceful body that the man drool. The long violet-red hair swayed back and fort as she turned her head.
Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
Fantasy · Littlecarrot
Poster -> posture
He stood up closely in front of her to protect her. His height was under her chest, but he didn't lose his mighty and handsome poster at all.
Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
Fantasy · Littlecarrot
Majesty -> majestic
The cracking scales grew beautifully. XieXie looked more majesty, strong and mighty than before!
Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
Fantasy · Littlecarrot
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 157 Contracting & Promotion
Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
Fantasy · Littlecarrot
Post -> posed
How can this human be so reasonable and empathy? That's right, the thunder white wolf never took the initiative to attack any human. Unless that human post a threat to them.
Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
Fantasy · Littlecarrot
This Phoenix is adorably sweet. It’s like he’s having his first Christmas 😂
"Yoi!!! The spiritual water! Not a pond but an enormous spiritual waterfall and fairy water! Help!! This phoenix is going to faint!" FengHuang patted his beating heart.
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Fantasy · Littlecarrot
lol I thought that a Potato God was about to sprout, angry at being used as a metaphor for being stupid 😂
"Damn it! Are you looking down on me! Do you want a fight?" The sky suddenly appeared a faint lightening, as if the weather was about to change.
Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
Fantasy · Littlecarrot
Will she free those bound beasts soon? Those guards have been sleeping for ages now 🤔
After she dealt with the problem here, and help the five beasts, she will return to the Divine Kunlun sect and prepare for the secret realm with her brother.
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Fantasy · Littlecarrot
Honestly she seems to feel that way about every man she meets 😅 Must be an amazing place.. sigh
Staring at the man's face, this man was the most beautiful man she had ever seen in her life. She couldn't describe his picturesque beauty by words.
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Fantasy · Littlecarrot
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 179 118 Release List (First Update)
The Prime Minister’s Darling
General · Pian Fangfang
Bite -> bit Shook -> shake
"Hell is empty and all the devils are here....what are you waiting for…" The shadow kissed her neck and bite her ear. When the shadow appeared, the aesthetic red space seemed to shook slightly as if everything here felt the terror power from the black shadow.
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Fantasy · Littlecarrot
Panic -> panicked tear blood, it has never stopped falling -> blood tears, they never stopped falling
"Yue'er..." His voice choked, he couldn't say anything more because he was extremely panic now, and he didn't know what to do. No matter how he wiped her tear blood, it has never stopped falling.
Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
Fantasy · Littlecarrot
“How misery Yue’er heart was that result her tears turned to blood?” This sentence is confusing. Perhaps something more like, “How miserable was Yue’ers heart that her tears turned to blood?” “…torment, he felt difficult to breathe.” Grammatical errors. Perhaps, “…torment. He found it difficult to breathe.” Or, “…torment and he found breathing suddenly difficult.”
How misery Yue'er heart was that result her tears turned to blood? Lin Yin Zhu's heart was throbbing in torment, he felt difficult to breathe.
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Fantasy · Littlecarrot
Is she aware then that her sister has a twisted obsession with killing? I thought that she still saw her as the heroine 🤔
Shenlian YingYue was left to speechless by the strange idea of the author. Can the two people fall in love with each other because of the same twisted mind when killing?
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Fantasy · Littlecarrot