Fox with an odd system
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Famous actress Lu Qing's life takes a dramatic turn when she gets hit by a truck. Now in a new world, she embarks on an unexpected journey with the help of many figures that will help her along the way.
Find out Lu Qing's journey in a new world with a system that seems a bit...odd.
DISCLAIMER : All the locations and events in this novel are completely fictions please do not take this seriously.
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- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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Great idea, for a novel and the background information in the beginning gives us a pleasant side story. I can see that comedy will be a big part of this story which is a plus, since the comedy is rather lighthearted and cheerful great story, keep up the good work!!
I love how you’re progressing the story so far! I adore The main character, she seems like a very bubbly and energetic girl. I love her dialogue and her inner thoughts, it’s quite humorous. The only critique I have is that the grammar could be improved, and that some parts feel quite empty (and can be further expanded/explained). Despite that, I think this is a great read. Keep it up, author!