/ / Is this the life of an undead;it turned out way better than i expected
Is this the life of an undead;it turned out way better than i expected
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Elias was an average high schooler who suffered the terrible fate of getting crushed by an ice cream truck just because he was startled.
He opened his eyes and found himself in a mansion that little or no light could penetrate into despite the sunny afternoon.
He was startled again after hearing this sweet soothing voice at the side of the room and introduce herself as Valentine blood falled the one who carries the will and blood of the queen of all vampires.
Elias was quite astonished and at the same time confused at what she had said but everything soon became clear........as he finds out he himself had now been turned into a vampire, the carrier of the king of all vampire non the less.
His fate has now been sealed with that of valentine as they now walked the same part, his life as forever been changed as he was now living the life of an undead just right after he was giving that role in a cosplay drama, is destiny at work in the life of Elias.....who knows?
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Thank you all for your interactions, I hope with your help my book would continue to grow.
it's good that you've improved your character design and thee details of the world and scenes
At first, I thought by the long name it would be stupid, but then I came to think about it. My favourite anime has an extremely long name, I decided to try it and bro, I did not regret it.
It's quite interesting, I can see it has potentials but you could really improve on character design and world background
I hope you enjoy it, it's a fun story.....