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An Individual from Earth finds themselves in the Shinobi World, equipped with a Scientific System. From that moment, he delved into scientific research far ahead of its time.
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I'm writing this review as of chapter 241. Grammar: the translator is doing an excellent job translating this fanfic, so far there are very few mistakes that I could find throughout this story and the editing is also excellent. Plot: the plot is good with no glaring plot holes. The flow is also nice and there were no arcs where I found myself bored and skipping chapters. The MC's system is also simple to understand and doesn't have one of those system consciousness that always speak and annoys, though from chapter 140 there were no more mentions of system missions and technology points so it seems like the system faded to the background somewhat. The MC's personality: this here is one of the glaring downsides of this fanfic. Till chapter 150 the MC's personality is as if he's a machine with no emotions whatsoever, even with Tsunade pursuing him relentlessly since they were children he never responses to anything and just acts coldly towards her and everyone else. Then from chapter 150 to 200 it somewhat improved and there were mentions of him have having some "feelings" here and there as he responded to Tsunade's advances and caring for her brother and some other people, but that too isn't much. To sum it all up, I will give this fanfic a 4-star review only because of the MC's personality.
A good story with a reincarnate orochimaru with a scientific system (serum + weapon + gene ect) an original story with a lot of good thing and the mc is not an average chinese mc who only think about women and s*x
very well translated without weird naming error, translator put some efforts on this recommended, the story itself is decent pacing with refreshing scenario to naruto fanfic, the author didn't afraid to change plot trajectory of canon naruto. simply put very interesting
Absolutely naive, childish (but with pretense of wisdom) piece of shit. If you belive that 3 hokage s a good man - read it! If you believe that shinobi world is a rainbows world - resd it! If you believe that residents of that world would say that killing is a last resort (like modern children) - read it! If your answers were "no" in every question - then don't even begin!
It's a pretty interesting and entertaining story. Some say that the MC doesn't have a reason for his character, however, it is shown to us at the beginning of the story. In my opinion, before reincarnating he was disappointed with the world, with Society, and then, combining with Orochimaru, the result is understandable. Also his distance with Tsunade is not very big, in itself, he doesn't get close to her at the beginning due to moral aspects of "age" but even so he doesn't push her away, or treat her badly, in fact, it could be said that he agrees, but that it's not the right time to be a couple. So Tsunade's attitude is justified, and it makes sense, because although not many see progress, the MC is only close to her, which gives her security. There are times when the relationship is seen changing, and a bond stronger than a camaraderie is shown, so there is a constant development. The MC is not interested in finding a partner nor is he obsessed with it, everything flows according to his personality, and if he does something out of place, or that is not understandable, there is an explanation of why. It is a magnificent story, thank you for your continued work and dedication.
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This is really good, it doesn’t feel like a Chinese translation at all, the beginning, felt oddly similar to a orochimaru as MC book that I’ve read about with a similar system however, I found out after a few amount of chapters that this is a different novel. I almost missed this gem, it’s really great. The pacing is perfect and no 8 year old kage level mc with mangekyou.
honestly this is one of the Chinese fanfics that doesn't make me wanna take a 12 gauge and empty my brains out. development is great however there might be a harem in the later stages of the story (around chap 200). The translator did take out most of the inherent arrogance the side characters have and give them somewhat? of a personality. 4.8/5
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It was interesting at first, but started getting a little boring later on. I know that the MC took over Orochimaru's body, but he is acting way too much like him even though he only had the memories of a 5 years old Orochimaru so it shouldn't have affected his original personality much. His relationship with Tsunade was nice, so suddenly turning it into a harem came out of nowhere and it didn't really make sense. The system is interesting, unfortunately it wasn't mentioned much in the story. There are some other things that felt really forced, just so they can be similar to canon (for example his Sannin title).
Well translated but suffers greatly from Chinese writing. Plot holes, things that don't make sense, etc. The mc is also pretty bland. He's just a more sane orichimaru.
I'm at Chap 200+ and will stop reading for now, the reason? I'm too corrupted to not think about it. And this is good work, i don't have to use much of my brain power to understand the story, so far good but i'm stopping for a bit. good work Author! or... translator? anyway, i have good times reading it.
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For the first 100 chapters it's not bad, but I don't understand why do authors give systems and then they just disappear out of nowhere. It went from interesting scientist to op harem with no system. Dropped after 322 chapters it went from interesting twist to generic copy and paste gotta catch em all harem.
In general, another excellent translation from this author, there is nothing Chinese at all. The story is good and has an interesting perspective. The only thing is that in all the author’s works the characters are rather anti-heroes in nature and in the stories there are many moments with dubious morality. I would like something more positive :)