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Noah Carter never expected anything good from life, a broke programmer who worked hours to settle the immense debts in his name.
That was until he was chosen by the most powerful system in the world.
[Idle Tycoon System Activated]
The system gifted him a shop in a world filled with demons and dragons.
His bread healed wounds, his drinks increased mana, and his crisps increased comprehension!
Every sale generated automatic income. Every world unlocked new possibilities.
However, things weren’t simple. Noah needed to keep selling to ensure he had enough money to purchase new products.
One shop became hundreds spanning medieval kingdoms, game-like worlds, cultivation realms and much more.
Noah's network spread across dimensions like a cosmic plague of convenience stores.
Countless years later, Noah raised his head from the clouds and realised something unexpected. He had become the richest and most powerful man in the universe.
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I want to say F you author for making me, a grown arss man cry. Overall great book, Didnt really expect how wholesome this turnend out, Either way great surprise. Please continue updating your story, I will pray for your health and success.
Hey everyone, author here! This novel is my way of fixing everything I wasn’t happy with in my last work, Ultimate Choice System. I wanted to write something that felt fresh, not the same old clichés you see everywhere. You won’t find an arrogant young master every ten chapters here. Face slapping? Yeah, it might happen, but not in the usual over the top way. Think of it more like a polite slap with a smile, no brainless bragging, just satisfying moments that make sense. If you’re into kingdom building and store management, this story should interest you. The MC doesn’t just wake up with a palace and a gold mine. He builds things up step by step, learns from his mistakes, and actually works for his progress. Also, no sudden IQ drops just to make the protagonist look smart. Harem? Not sure yet. Romance? Definitely a slow burn—nothing serious until after chapter 100. That’s it from me. Hope you enjoy the ride :)
It's not a bad novel, but I wouldn't say it's good, either. The main character is cowardly and naive at first, but then he starts learning and acting smarter, so that is good because it doesn't last longer than 20 chapters. The first problem I noticed was inconsistencies. In the first chapters, the author has the princess give twenty (or thirty, I don't remember) gold coins to a random vendor on the street, but later, we see that her father, the king, considers one thousand gold coins to be a lot, and that the guild master and other powerful figures in the empire can barely pay five hundred gold coins. I think the author didn't think too hard about the economy at first, and we can see that every chapter. Another problem is the timing. The shop changes places every ten days, so at most, he could have known the princess, the guild masters, and the slaves for ten days. We know for a fact that he knew them for less than ten days (because he didnt met all of them from the very first day and didnt met them every day. The princess, for example, sent her guards to buy stuff instead of doing it herself everyday). But even if he did, how could he have become best friends with the world elite in ten days? They even had an emotional farewell and whatnot even though he had only met them for ten days and their interactions were limited to buying and selling stuff. The cat siblings became obsessed with him after his shop changed places, we can assume that it's because he saved their life but even then it feel pretty exaggerated. The characters lack life. All the good people the MC knows are really good, and when someone is bad, you can instantly tell and everything they do is bad. We are led to believe that the noble who owned the cat siblings is bad because he is a slave owner. Yet, we can't see the king, the princess, the guild master, or anyone else having slaves, even though slavery is legal in the kingdom (because they are good people and if they had slaves they wouldn't be perfect good people) How does that make any sense? Of course, this nobleman has slaves so he is bad, and therefore a traitor who has allied with demons, even though his status and position don't make sense for him to be a demon collaborator. Everything is convenient, and the main character is exactly where he should be. The first time he appeared, he was in the middle of nowhere, but conveniently, the guild master was there to buy from him and give him publicity. She is, of course, a good person and wouldn't rob him, no matter how suspicious he is. He finds a slave who has suffered at the hands of humans, but instead of suspecting him, he conveniently trusts him. This slave has a protective sister who, instead of suspecting him, is conveniently eternally grateful, no matter how weird he acts. Both brother and sister are conveniently geniuses in their respective fields, magic and swordsmanship, and rival the main character, who has a shop full of magic items and a system that gives him knowledge every time he levels up his profession. When ten days pass, and his shop changes places, he conveniently meets only good demons and people, and he is conveniently noticed by an exiled princess who has a beauty that could topple a country (or something like that). This applies to every character in this novel and everything he does. Everything is convenient. Plot armor is hard. He isn't good at anything, and we can assume that anyone with a system would have gotten the same or better results no matter how incompetent he is. Even his character and morality are average. That said, it's a good way to pass the time. You can read it in two afternoons, and it's not good enough to be considered good, but it's not bad enough to drop it
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I would definitely recommend this story if you are having a very good day but you want to be depressed and frustrated for some insane godly reason!!! I am really not sure who is the target audience who will enjoy reading this type of cowardly pathetic MC? you know those types of game ads where person does something so obviously wrong (as marketing strategy) so as to lure you into correcting it. That is the closest approximation of how you will feel while reading all the MC's antics.
MC is an ultimate edge-lord, bland, emotionless beyond basic feelings, without any complexity, while every character around him looks at him as if he shits golden bricks every morning. System is your typical cringey tool. Would not recommend it to anyone, who looks for anything beyond "my system strong, now look at me curbstorming everything". It has no qualities and random events are blander than nescaffe. 1/10
Thanks for the Book!!!!! 🥂 📖🍾 Let me be give you all five stars for all five categories for your new book, Author-san 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖📚
hey author you confidently told us to atleast wait till free chapters to see whether the Mc i have read all free chapters and i have to say that the Mc is the most unrealistic 28 years old i have ever read,my son of 15 year started working for my shop had more common sense, business sense and was wayyyyy less pathetic.If you wanted to make this realistic at least put his age in somewhere around 18-19 then i could maybe understand.But really a 28 year old man with financial problems,taking loan from loan sharks,an entrepreneur,paying dads medical bills cannot be this much stupid,it is just unrealistic.I know you wanted to show character development but making the most pathetic MC and then(i hope you will)having character development to give him normal IQ and EQ of a 28 year old is just bad writing, everything is great with this novel EXCEPT the most important thing i.e,MC HIMSELF
This book is a big disappointment. The author springs a idle money system on some schmuck and then proceeds to power him to the stratosphere inside a month. I really wanted to like it, to see him struggle to build a client base and trust while fighting to stay afloat in the real world. Instead, divine providence lands on him in 4 successive shop teleports. Pick up two cat slaves with legendary amounts of talent. Make instant friends with princesses, kings and high powerful people while suffering no setbacks or challenges. Suddenly you're in the demon realm and you've got your pure succubus princess all over you. Suddenly you're back on earth and fighting in sword tournaments.. This isn't what I expected or wanted. Updates are stable and quality control is decent enough, but the content is a big turd in the toilet.
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just read all the free chapters and the story is pretty fun and has a cool concept, and im looking forward to reading it fully once more of it is released.
Worth every second spent reading, development is a little slow but reasons behind it are thoughtful and make sense, world building currently is top tier every character is thought out and plays their roles well but my favourite aspect about this novel so far isn't the power scaling or Lola (if you know, you know) but the subtle references from things we all know if. absolute cinema. kudos to the author and i cannot wait to see the ending of this novel.
Man, why in this kind of novels doesn't the hero use his head well and think before he starts selling things? He could have asked about the price of a product with similar characteristics to his product and set a good price for his product, 10% or 20% less than the market price, for example, in order to get the highest possible profit. Please, writer, do me a favor and make MC ask about the fair price of his products in the damn market. Also have him ask anyone about the background of the scientist and offer him a reward...information is always power.
Risaliyah my man continues to impress with his mastery of the genre. I thoroughly enjoyed his previous work, which showcased his unique storytelling style and deep understanding of world-building. His latest work is a testament to his growth as a writer—well-paced, engaging, and rich in detail. A fantastic read that further establishes his place among the top authors in the field.
very nice story...and world setting?well there isn't only one of it so it's a tick..but one thing ticked me off.... It's about charecter illustration where is the maincharecters illustration where as there is a illustration of a girl who I not even the female lead but a freaking supporting charecter... people like me loose interest if you disrespect your own damn mc
You created an amazing world with a good concept, and the system was a little unique too. The garbage MC just ruined the book for me. Like, he had so much potential, and the world was set up so well for him, only for him to basically throw it all away. Please fix this somehow, it probably drives a lot of readers away👍🫡
I dont read novels i usually read manhwa and I read like the first chapter cause I was curious but I can't stop reading its hard for me only thing im waiting for is more Chapters
while I'll agree with several other reviews, the mc is quite pathetic in early chapters but I've pushed thru those and he's somewhat better now. the thing I don't like about the mc currently is his gatekeeping of the primer products from his Earth family but throws every advantage to those of Esta. Very pompous of him to steal Ethan's thunder in the esports gaming sector when he could allow Ethan the upgrades in intelligence, vitality, and dexterity. Benefits that would allow him to excel and make $$$ thru his passion.
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A good system novel to read. Plenty of moments you will experience as you read this. I won't mention them as they are for you to experience.
I really enjoy this Story alot. There are more of these Typ of Novels out there, but this one is one of the best for sure. MC isnt stupid, the System doesnt block his development and is helping him like it should. Thanks so far Author and i cant wait to see what you have planned for this one. :)[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=exp]