Lewd System: Every Scream and Moan is EXP

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Intoxicated_Ink

After writing around 130 chapters here, I am not being a slacker and am writing a review, well, a walkthrough of my novel and some questions I have encountered. Also you all can treat this review as a QnA section. So first I want to tell you about the novel. At first, it wasn’t made for readers. I made it for myself to learn how I can write the lemons. But things took a turn. It became quite popular, never leaving the popular page and bestseller top ladders. So I continued it and plotted the end for it too. As it was just for my practice, I was literally having fun putting everything in. I didn’t know what readers wanted from smut novels and was already late as I reached around 29 chapters. I was enjoying my fantasy fights till then, but when I got to know what readers want like lemons, spicy romance, plot related to smut, and yes, more smut, then the book really took a great turn. Therefore, I would recommend reading just a chapter after 29 or whenever the free chapters end. Now for the QnA I am picking top questions: Is this novel containing magic or superpowers? Well, the answer to it is a bit complex. It does have magic or superpower elements but they are introduced later(Not saying for VR world-- Its meant for a real world), after volume 1. It is a bit complicated to explain, but yes, after volume 1, magic will be permanent. Why are all the heroines hateable? It is because I wanted that, and for the heroine part they were heroines of the game, not the actual novel. There are many women and milfs who will drive you all crazy, and some will be too wholesome. So yeah, don’t consider the heroines as the FMC. Does this novel follow the cliché of transmigration as an extra trope? No, not at all. However, the transmigration part to a game is true, but the MC doesn’t know the plot very well, plus the plot never follows the same. So basically, it was done to introduce the cast. There is also a very nice question someone asked: why does the MC behave like a scaredy cat at the start while being a genius? To answer this, first think of a scenario. You are the best gamer on Earth and get teleported to another world where women are superior. And you have teleported to a weak body and don’t know how to survive or what to do next. Wouldn’t you take time to adjust? Wouldn’t you need a single boost to prove to yourself that you are still worthy? The same is with Jax. He will behave like that for the initial 10 or fewer chapters until he realizes that the game wasn’t theirs, it was his to begin with. And a top genius gamer doesn’t mean he is a god. He will have the same arrogant personality from before until the end if we ignore the lustfulness that his system will give him. That’s all for this box, let’s meet in the comment section next.

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Anitimesc

What does the tag mean it said slightly toward NTR? Will the MC Jax be NTR ? Or does this mean the MC will be the one to NTR other people?

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Daoist7CXSNr

Just made granny number one cuz I love gilfs

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DaoistBoTDEK

mr.Author pls fix the discord link it has expired. We can't join.😭

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Amelia_Gladhis

Thanks For The Book 😎🍄📖🦃🎑 Looking Forward for the Next Chapters 😆🍔📖🍟🍻

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Pedro_Sousa

Truly loving this novel a lot, it delivers what is expected with wonderful and beautiful female leads, and a baddass mc, not perfect, but growing. This has joined my recommendation list. Thanks for the hardwork author!

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literl010

I only read the free chapters so far. It's a good start with potential, but it's not a 5/5 for me yet. I'll probably leave it a few months and unlock the paid chapters then. The premise isn't anything ground breaking but nicely executed. Writing quality is good, with perfect English spelling and grammar, and without obvious or excessive AI usage. The Lemons have a nice amount of detail without becoming cringe or distracting. Action is nicely done too, with tense moments portrayed well. My only real problem is that none of the characters are likable. All the women (FLs and his family) are incredibly conceited and arrogant, with few if any redeeming features other than what they can offer him physically. The MC is quite arrogant too, is overly 'quippy' (which starts to get distracting and undermines the action - especially as most don't really land, so feel a bit like AI) and is lacking proper characterization. It's still early, so there's plenty of time to address this, it'd just have been nice to witness it in the free chapters so I could have a more informed opinion.

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Samule_Umitit

Good novel so far, hopefully Mc stays cold hearted to his enemies early on and potentially adding aspects like early pregnancy with this harem so it won’t turn into a baseless harem without rivalry so they should compete for his 1st child that will add to the story and character development because what’s a good reason for character development yes it’s unexpected pregnancy and preparing to be a father witch has rarely happened in other novels that wait until epilogue for children(just a suggestion) Really hope u listen to this it could attract more viewers thanks!! it would be suitable to have children if author desired to add them but only after the academy arc!

Hey! I just finished your story and wow, I’m hooked. The way you built the world felt so alive, I could literally see it playing out like a movie in my head. Honestly, I kept imagining how epic it would look as a comic or graphic novel. I’m a paid commission artist and I love bringing stories like this to life through visuals. If you’re ever curious about what your world could look like on the page, I’d love to show you some ideas. No pressure at all, I just think your work has amazing visual potential. You can hit me up on Discord (lunapuresoul) or Instagram (lunaartsoul) anytime if you’d like to check out my portfolio or just chat about it!