Reborn With A Technology System In A Fantasy World

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YoungCreator

Alright, it's time I follow in on the shameless tradition of leaving a 5-star review for your work. *cough*, *cough*, totally unbiased for sure. But hey, while I'm here, I figured I'd use this space to answer some questions about the story, the MC, and what exactly you're getting into. So, spend some time and scroll through. >>So... what's this book about? Basically, it follows a boy named Adrian, a former overworked engineer who dies in his previous world, only to wake up as a baby in a world full of magic, nobles, magical beasts, and kingdoms. But! Against all expectations, Adrian fails his magical awakening and is declared a Dud! >>The heck! What's so special about him if he can't use magic? From the book's name, I assumed you'd have figured that out already. When it seems all is lost for Adrian, a system awakens inside him. Not one for magic though… but one for technology. >>Nah, what's so special about that? You see, the world Adrian found himself in is actually pretty backward. And suddenly, Adrian's dreams of building things and shaping the world becomes very, very real. >>Hmm, I'm getting in on something... But, so he just builds stuff for people? That seems kinda lame. Nope. The system allows him to do far more. He combines mana and technology to build groundbreaking tech, and even make himself strong enough to face the dangers and wild adventures this fantasy world throws at him. >>Alright, alright. So what's the guy like? Adrian's not your typical loud-mouthed hero. He's quiet and calculating in all his actions. While his personality won't reveal itself too much in the early chapters, trust me, the more you read, the more of him you'll see. >>Okay, are you sure you won't drop this novel though? I've had this novel brewing in my head for a long time. And with your support, I believe I'll be able to fulfill my dream of writing this story all the way to the end. So, go on. Start reading. And hey, if you've got any more questions, hit the comment section. I'll be hanging out there too. Thank you! :)

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Agamar

I love this story. It’s very unique. A technology/technomagical aspect in a medieval setting. Not really any love interests yet, but I love the way the story is progressing, and I love the way the system upgrades him. He’s not too overpowered too quickly, which I love, because when that happens the story gets stale quick. There are some minor grammatical errors here and there, but much better than some others I’ve read. Thank you author for all you’ve done so far, and I really hope to read much more!

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InfiniteRaider

Overall I really like the story and the concept. It is refreshing to have the main character not have access to the normal power system of the world. Separately, the main thing I like most about the story is the overall progression of it. While to some it may seem a little fast pasted compared to other novels. It follows a more traditional progression that a fantasy book would have. In tandem with that, I appreciate the little amount of filler within the story and the consistent theme! Definitely would recommend giving the story a read if you enjoy world and kingdom building mixed with fun characters and combat. Thank you Author for your continuous hard work and dedication to the story!

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WanderingLord

I am giving it 3 because I haven't read all free chapters. the first impression is worse. I only read the start. it's all predictable. mc is considered smart at the start. failed to awaken talent. exiled by the family. it feels like Chinese novel. I won't waste my time with this.

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MiasmaLotus

a story i believe has huge potential. as long as the author doesn't start to rush things. Hopefully, not to many more time skips.

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RedDevil30

it's wasted...a novel with great potential and an interesting idea got wasted... author why do you have to make MC so rush? he's only 10 but he's rushing with everything like he will die tomorrow...he's personality too...how should I call it?stupid?trash?or maybe both... overall it's not that bad,but everything is ruined by the filling that MC gives and he's stupid decision... abandoned after tolerating it till chapter 88...best of luck authors,and try learning about patience

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daoist_from_west

I am regretting I found this novel so early. I just want author to drop more chapters daily🙏🙏

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ShadyK1ng

Pretty good novel so far. I've read a few novels based on the technology things but this one is one of the best. So far, the MC is not facing any danger, I wonder when will he be threatened to release his technology secrets only then the story will be interesting. So far, its coool!!!

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Danny03

This story is rather disappointing, although it’s better a slop work, but just by a little, first of all the side characters are absolute BS their actions makes no sense and only seem to exist to give the Mc the spotlight the only character I actually liked is the evil brother when you read him you actually feel angry and that is a good sign even tho the brother is a scumbag he is a much better character then all the other bs characters another complain is the adults and powerhouses yeah technology can actually make a lot of difference but we are at a time when such things were not thought f for them to suddenly understand it’s overwhelming value makes no sense to me and let’s say they did what stops them from utilizing their immense influence early on? Moving on the main character idk what to say except it’s a very poorly made character, his attitude and behaviour is often times nonsense and out of place not to mention how little he does on his own and how much he is carried by the system and this brings me to my next complain, what’s the point? The tech system is literally doing everything it’s so ridiculous that i find myself cringing at everything happening in the story not only does it have an auto learn function where just touching a book gives you all the knowledge it also has a fking factory inbuilt what’s the point all this? Where is world building, we don’t get the time to adjust to the world or learn about its structure or its living conditions but things just happen suddenly, I want to say more but I will keep it this much, this is not a good novel, but its not worth the investment but if you want to waste time it’s good enough for that but tbh this novel feels more like the authors practise work rather then a well thought and planned novel.

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scribblelaurpaul

First chapter already hyped me up. I haven't read that much chapter, but I can already tell within five minutes that this novel will be awesome!

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ad_sapientiam

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westley

Its really hard to enjoy a book where none of the characters feel real. All of them have the IQ of peanuts and its 100% the authors fault. Characters will act in ways that are quite literally ridiculous if the situations were reality. Equally, the pacing and power progression in this novel is insane. The majority of issues could easily be fixed if the author just tried a little to think about how things would play out in reality. I mean just his age and personality alone is ridiculous. It's a shame there is a great concept and a lot of potential. The author just needs to stop testing their characters and premises so superficially. Remove any plot armor, own up to any mistakes already made by thinking of a way out of them, and stop making characters so simple. The writing so far makes it look like you as an author don't actually care about your characters. Now don't get me wrong. I do think the author cares, some of the minor details and efforts to foreshadow prove a certain level of care for the work. That's why I especially don't get why they completely drop the ball on character building and story progression

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Don_Johnson_9869

Patiently waiting for more chapters. This is helping my own love-life. Tried a couple tricks on my wife, she enjoyed.

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StCollektor

Sorry for my poor English. Interesting topic. Easy and unobtrusive writing style. And this work encourages self-study. Now for the bad, the beginning is very bad. We are shown a loser who died not because of a bad boss, difficult family circumstances, but an idiot who put work before his own health. I'm sorry, but this is a terrible first meeting. It doesn't get any better. In the second chapter, we are told that there are aristocrats around, but the words and actions of the people in the novel say otherwise. Faith in the people around us is destroyed instantly. The relationships between the characters are terrible. The protagonist is hated by his brothers and sisters because of his ‘genius’. But, because we have seen these characters only once, this hatred looks fake, not real. When the hero is kicked out, he is picked up by a very convenient couple. They don't force the protagonist to work, to help, and allow him to do whatever he wants. Iron, brass, it certainly costs money, but if a strange child wants to play... I hope it was the protagonist's mother who did this, otherwise it's complete nonsense. Now to the main feature of the work, the science. And here everything makes me doubt. The hero begins to forge gears. How can you make a gear with just an anvil and a hammer? Without any special tools or devices to make a gear? Please don't be lazy and google what a gear looks like. And the protagonist does it all perfectly on the first try! This is a very complex part that requires precision and balance! (I'm not talking about the fact that the protagonist forges gears, but makes them by casting - think for yourself what is easier.) There are 2 options here. Either the author has studied everything very superficially and therefore you do not believe in the manufacture of watches. Or the author does not know how to justify the protagonist's actions sufficiently for a better understanding. So, this is not a work where you can take everything the protagonist does on faith. Every scientific thing requires double-checking. Reading this work, you will become smarter only if you check everything that is said, otherwise you will remain in the grip of stereotypes.

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Lx_Surreal

I really like this story so far. I only have one small critique. The world you created is supposed to be a medieval world setting, yet I've seen characters use terms such as riding shotgun. A medieval world without knowledge of guns wouldn't have this term. I only ask for you to please remember the setting of the world you're writing about when writing about the language used. Otherwise, this is a great story. Very well written.

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Casper_Erdioner

The writing itself is actually quite decent and the premise itself is interesting. That is the only good things I can really say. Nothing really grabbed my interest until he made the clock, and then the author went full dumb mode and made high precision gears with a BLACKSMITHS HAMMER, it took me all of 2 minutes of googling to figure out that casting them in molds or filing disks of metal by hand was the method to make high precision gears. It doesn't exactly inspire confidence in the story if the author can't even bother to check something so simple. I barely got to know the main character at all so there was very little to make me like or dislike him. I don't even know what he looks like and I can't even remember if it was even mentioned at all. The family felt one dimensional and boring, the beginning was so predictable that I could barely pay attention to it. There was finally some life in the story by chapter 7 or 8, but then the clock making incompetance came out in full force.

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RinRyuu

best novel fr give it a read totally worth paying for

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Jeet_1993

I think a story of great potential. everything has detailed description. but author seems to have done a blunder with age. he mentioned the mc as 10 and forgot to timeskip. the visualisation of mc , we expect from much mature like around minimum 15 or 18 but but thats not the case here. i guess, may be this is because of absense of love interest and this thing low age issue, really irks a lot and acts as deterence when we continue to read later plots. i remember same blunder from a genius author did from supreme magus but he atleast came clear that age of 12 is same as age of 18 in new world. this issue is so common blunder that even a new author of some random extra books had to change the age from 12 to 16. i would like to request author to kindly address this thing as it actually doesn't make sense for a toddler to become king with height of 170 cm at only 10. rest all good. thx...

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maxandmills

good book good book good book [img=recommend][img=strong][img=recommend]