Reincarnated as a RABBIT!?:[MUTATION SYSTEM]

LV 15

deadhydra50

I have to first say that the story has potential. But There is a lot of grammatical errors, like Gacha becomes Guchi, Active skills becomes skills active and many others which can be fixed with a spellcheck system. Also some of the skill names feels uninspired and plain borning. Other than that it’s Difficult to say anything else until the grammar has improved.

LV 2

noah_pomerantz

good novel but the writing is a little hard to understand

LV 4

Suleman_abdulazeez

the story and character development is a work in progress, but i like how it is currently going, plus i hope to add more action and love seen soon in the novel..

LV 13

Fantasie

Great novel, can’t wait for more chapters!

LV 11

ignoremee

finally a yuri scene the novel is good the update stability is kinda slow but i can wait there is some typos but is okay for me cuz i am here for yuri hehe

LV 15

Ai_ENMA

First of all the story is really great and has a lot of potential. The MC is funny and a little dumb but this is okay at the beginning I think, let her just be aware of the danger of the world she is in and she should become a little bit more careful and thoughtful and please more Updates

LV 3

Miyoko

4/4 the grammar is just so bad and spelling is bad too every sentence and the names are just so bad too and other things. The spelling mistakes are obvious too smsjsjkkskkaksk

LV 15

Zachary_Patterson

Really good story line please keep this project moving forward[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

LV 1

DaoistYNTfmJ

i like it just doesn't real reales to often.