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Wednesday: Recarnated with "Heavenly Restriction"
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They called him Toji Frump...
A transfer who shouldn’t have been allowed through Nevermore’s gates.
Polite. Detached. Dangerous.
No one knows where he came from, or why he carries eyes that never flinch and a scar that never healed.
When he saves Wednesday Addams from a fate meant to shape her story, the world tilts off its axis.
She sees a mystery. He sees a problem.
But the more she pries, the closer she comes to a truth not even the Addams family is ready for...
And a man who hides something far colder than his smile.
Because some cages aren’t made of bars......
They’re built from secrets and obsession.
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I don't think using AI is wrong, but with all due respect, this is a very emotionless story..good luck [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Ai is used way to much, the mc’s personality is all over the place as well. First he is a polite young man, then he is a brooding damaged hunk, then a smug possessive jerk. Also it’s stupid how he can just be walking down the hall and all the students will stop and stare out of fear, awe of his skills, or his handsomeness repeatedly every chapter it feels like.
I have read up to the 13th chapter and it is feeling like I am reading the same thing over and over. I don't like this fan fiction it felt like a waste of time.
I love jjk and all but I don’t see the hype around heavenly restriction. Other than Toji glazers ( the author himself and the toji simps ) it’s just not that cool or powerful. Why not isekai with Kashimo’s thunder technique ? Or Hakari’s technique ? There are so much better options… I rest my case your honor.
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Its interesting... There are comments condemning it and comments glazing it to high heavens. There doesn't seem to be an in-between. On one hand the basic premise is interesting. You have an arranged marriage with Wednesday, a character archetype that would draw her in, and a power and ability that makes quick and easy sense. All good points that could make an interesting story. The problem is... its just not written well. The first three chapters are a real issue. There doesn't seem to be a piece of Human writing in them. As you reach chapter 5 it tones down the over the top A.I writing but still its... eh? On one hand it takes a lot of guts to post a fanfic. I say this as someone who writes a ton of Fanfics but never posts them. I respect those that do. And I'm not against A.I usage, it is and will continue to be an invaluable tool in many ways. I do preach restraint in its usage though. I for one only use to help inspire descriptions of people, places and things, give me an example paragraph when I have Writers Block, and to give me constructive feedback. I would rarely, if ever, directly paste A.I content into my stories though, it would always get processed and molded by me into my own paragraph and description. A.I in my opinion should be a springboard for creativity not its replacement. At the end of the day, its this Authors choice to use A.I however they like. In my opinion if you can stomach A.I stories its well worth a look and a cursory read. I just personally am not a fan of it.
don't quit writing off of bad comments but, there's a lot wrong with the novel not in a Grammer way though that could be better. the "wrong' I'd say is in the character development and design. it doesn't match the original story so it's off putting when characters don't behave like they should. I'm liking the diving deeper into the backstory but you've made the mc too edgy from the beginning and repeated until it's annoying how hollow he is every chapter. I like the story though I'd recommend reading it if you have time to kill, it's not super deep or anything special but it isn't the trash that people have said in previous comments.
An author who isn't afraid to write what they like and doesn't give in to whiners who demand "No harem" in every work. For that reason alone, this deserves 5 stars. Furthermore, the story is definitely interesting. Many complain about the protagonist's power, but from my point of view, having such a powerful MC helps us focus on the romance and relationships.
Very nice, although the writing feels quite exaggerated through the first chapters. All the descriptions of MCs emotions, and all that from different perspectives. Still, really liked the development and hope to see more.
Don't know why people are hating so bad. This is a fantastic piece of literature, man! You're one of the rare few authors that actually got a full 5 stars from me. Which is a HIGH achievement. Genuinely love his personality, it's written very nicely, and the development. Oh my gosh, this is what I call character development! Some people may say this is too edgy but no, this right here is what I call the perfect blend. Keep on writing dude!
fire, I normally don't read these types of books but im glad I found this one. the characters so far stick true to there core nature, my only complaint is I want more chapters. Hopefully doesn't get dropped.
Before starting the review, I just want to say that my English isn't very good, but anyway, I started by reading reviews of the fic and saw many comments that the author used AI, but since I really like JJK, I ignored it and decided to read it. At no point did I feel like it was AI; the author simply paid attention to detail when describing the setting, and personally, I really liked the story. Although it lacks action, I think it makes up for it with how well the MC's relationships with the girls are written. Also, there will most likely be important fights in the upcoming chapters, so if you're reading this, give the fic a chance as far as you can read and don't let negative reviews sway you. I personally liked it, although the first few chapters are a bit slow. (Author, please don't abandon the fic)
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Your novel has some issues, repeated sentences, and the fact that we’re constantly reminded that he’s cold and calculating. The main character also doesn’t have much personality, or at least not a stable one. But overall, it’s a good story. Maybe you’ll rewrite it in the future without relying so much on AI.
Waaaaaaaaaay tooooooo much AI nothing is happening nothing about the mc is known. Is it a transmigrated person does he have hevenly restriction? Nothing is known you spend all this time describing stuff we have seen or know.