God your sad
Casper gained a rosy tinge of red on his cheeks as he embarrassingly rubbed his neck, "Y-You're welcome. My father used to tell me to be kind to others so the others would be kind to me back."
The Real Prince Charming!
Movies · TheViolentOne
calm down child its not that serious good god you have deeper issues than this plus yet again its a fantasy setting the wizard could have sorts of means to keep eyes on him think a little.
Master Elias chuckled in response, waving his hand in dismissal, "Spare me from it, Maximus. How many times do I have to tell you to treat me more like a close friend and less of a guest? Now, where's that bubble of energy Henry, hmm?"
The Real Prince Charming!
Movies · TheViolentOne
to be fair while he was pretty critical if you actually read over his review he highlighted some pretty big points of weakness with the character and overall story. I mean the guy isn't bashing it he just wants it to be better.
my guy why are you making the mc braindead it's no wonder he died I'm surprised he is not dead already. I get you seem to wajt a weak to strong trope but for the crying out loud man give your mc basic common sense there are enough brain dead mcs. And the whole woe is me I'm scared and away from family bs does not cut it here he's been in 40k for near a month and is just barely actually thinking things through. He for some reason could not put together maybe just straight up breathing toxic air is bad for me and could not even be bothered to look in depth into his abilities? like why man? seriously why it makes no actual sense.
Because rather than quality it's quantity now. pushing out as many fics as possible and slapping on locked chapters for sub pat quality translations in the hopes people spend more money. Sadly this platform has gotten outrageously predatory with their prices and how they have lowered quality of fics.
I'm in no position to criticise, but the majority of translations are subpar. Let's not even mention the wordplays and euphemisms that are so abundant in them.
The Forge Lord.
Book&Literature · SrDevoxero
no seriously it makes no sense for someone to be so stupid.
'Now I understand why my nose is burning and bleeding… damn it!' Internally, I cursed and raged at whatever force had brought me to this world, while outwardly, I could only show my resignation and weariness.
The Forge Lord.
Book&Literature · SrDevoxero
Why is the idiot either a drooling moron or one step above one.
"Know anywhere they might need a hand? Ricciardo sent me here." Gino's eyes flicked between the three figures, having made up his mind.
The Forge Lord.
Book&Literature · SrDevoxero
Huh so what it's like an entity gave him and his followers actual protection from chaos? I mean it's interesting but as people have said chaos is literally just one faction basically there are many other factions. I mean many of the necrons are still asleep and I don't think the main fleets of the tyranids have arrived yet if I remember right.
[•The Forge System extends this blessing to every member of your ships, stations, platforms, and faction members who have sworn loyalty to you. Those who follow the Forge Lord are destined for absolute greatness, free to impose your will across the galaxy.]
The Forge Lord.
Book&Literature · SrDevoxero
isn't there the mcu vs. I think it's the comic version? is that the inferior? As I know in one he was the child of a celestial and another he was some alien kings kid.
Although his death was a harsh memory, It was a stark contrast to the hardships faced by this body's original inhabitant. The loss of a mother to cancer and subsequent alien abduction leading to the wretched conditions of his current captivity.
I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
Movies · AlienWarlord
very late but Tertius711 on questionable questing is pretty solid at it along with Alexander94 also on questionable questing. the story children of refusal is done well as well.
[Can you guys recommend some good Kingdom-Building novels and books? I plan on reading more on the subject to further my understanding about it. Don't get me wrong, I have some basic knowledge about kingdom-building as I play video games like Total Warhammer, Civilization VI and Starcraft 2 with my ancient fossil-like family computer. I just want to see how others write about it and learn from them so I could implement it on this book. Your recs are greatly appreciated!]
The Real Prince Charming!
Movies · TheViolentOne