negative comment for gulping
"S-stay with me," I gulped as I brought my trembling hands down, "Please," I begged as my emotions got so overwhelmed, I had no idea how to deal with them. There was so much blood, it stained my dress as I sat next to his head.
To Love A Villain
Fantasy · _Chickennugget
look look so dumb of her say corvina ..I was ryt
Not after what I heard. I almost couldn't believe it, even though it made so much sense. It was far more believable than the lie all of us were told. Everyone thinks the exact same thing when they see her face but chooses to believe that it can't be true. After all, the whole manor burned down and 'no one' survived.
To Love A Villain
Fantasy · _Chickennugget
oh here she corrected her
"Yea," I sighed but I knew something was wrong. The anxiety in me isn't settling down. I looked at Serena, "You need to stop calling me Corvina," I said, "I'm Amber now,"
To Love A Villain
Fantasy · _Chickennugget
why is she calling her corvina though its her name but what if someone like loyal or anyone else heard it
"Corvina! Calm down,"
To Love A Villain
Fantasy · _Chickennugget
people normally gulped but don't mention it this many times ....author pls
I gulped, then rubbed my eyes, trying to shake off the fatigue, when I noticed something.
To Love A Villain
Fantasy · _Chickennugget
pls stop using gulped word in every three sentences
I gulped, lubricating my dry throat. It was the same dream I had the night before. I felt a chill go down my spine and the goosebumps made my skin stand up.
To Love A Villain
Fantasy · _Chickennugget
erghhh again
I gulped, "I know," I looked away, "It's just," I realize I've grown a bit dependent on Hael and that's not a good thing, "It's nothing."
To Love A Villain
Fantasy · _Chickennugget
sorry but its kind of irritating reading gulped again n again
I gulped, "Well, it's an event to decide who serves as a healer for who, right? Can't we just come to a decision with mutual understanding?" I looked at Illaris and then the high priest.
To Love A Villain
Fantasy · _Chickennugget
+1
as if it was his forst time experiencing this
"Hiss~ If only I had known Yun Ran's fortune-telling was so accurate, I would have brought more stuff with me. Now, look at me, chased by these Evil Ghosts like a dog!"
Cannon-Fodder Heiress Turns the Tables by Fortune-Telling
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