This is a very interesting book! The plot so far is pretty engaging, and I like the way you characterized the characters. I would advise checking on the grammar, though; in places it switches between past and present tense. Great work!
I love how fun and light hearted the story is! Really puts a smile on my face reading it. It might be a bit helpful for the author to pay more attention to grammar, especially in making sure all names and the beginning if sentences are capitalized. Overall, great work!
Thank you!! c:
Great read! I really like the detail that goes into the writing. I also found that you can really empathize with the characters, which demonstrates how well written it is. I’d recommend giving this a try!
The concept is very interesting and I haven’t seen many botanists before! I think the beginning starts off a little slower, and it could be more engaging with more events and dialogue. But the writing style is clean, and made for a pretty great read!
I really appreciate the effort the author went into to give accurate information, which definitely shows the amount of dedication that went into the novel! The whole concept of the story is also very interesting and original, so that draws the reader in. However, the writing would sometimes get a little dense with all of the information, and I would recommend interspersing giving background with current actions, thoughts, and dialogue of the characters, as that makes it more engaging. Great work overall!
The detailed research really shiws giw much effort you put in! It does get a little overwhelming, though. However, the writing is great so far!
Thank you!! ☺️
Thank you! I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it :)
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original Clockwork and Androids
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Ready Player Zero
4.93 Completato
The Oasis has swept the world by storm: a literal virtual reality haven, people log on and escape to another universe. Toshiro Yoshiaki, an internationally-ranked Oasis player, has just moved from Japan to Columbus to pursue being a professional player. He is slowly adapting to the ways of this new country, but retains a bittersweet nostalgia for his home. There’s just something missing… Zhou, a mysterious child who’s camped out in a park, lives in solitude. Why is he alone and what secrets does he hold?30 Chs 114 Raccolte
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Constellations and Harmonies
4.82
They were best of friends once, years ago. Still are, perhaps. But it’s been a while. Elise Ashton: stubborn yet determined, a brilliant aspiring astrophysicist with her head in the stars. Aiden Carter: caring and friendly, a talented musician who always has his friends and family at heart. When a twist of fate brings these two longtime childhood friends to vacation destination Silverstone Beach as teenagers, cool-headed logic meets ardent emotions as they struggle to understand each other—and themselves. After all these years, what’s changed…and what’s stayed the same?35 Chs 9 Raccolte
thank you! ready player one is definitely fascinating :)
Ready Player Zero
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