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_YoungMaster1
3 years ago
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the plot was good. but clearly the author writes to fill the daily word count ( i.e money) not for the quality the story doesn't even progress for hundreds of chapters. focusing on things that holds no relevance to the core story. really disappointing the author tries to focus so much in the explanation of cultivation that it becomes annoying at times. the cultivation levels are messy and all over the places

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_YoungMaster1
4 years ago
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_YoungMaster1
4 years ago
Commented

so many kind hearted simps in the comment section

'I hunted this game! This meat is mine, MINE! They will only be allowed to eat my scraps when and if I want so!'

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Fantasy · Legion20

_YoungMaster1
_YoungMaster1
4 years ago
Replied to thefruitofAri

age is relative, it have nothing to do with mental and physical maturity my mother gave birth to me when she was 19 and my grandmother gave first birth when she was probably 15 or something

Rena, together with her twin brother Orpal, was the eldest child. She was six years old, and her blonde hair with shades of black was the reason for her moniker.

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Fantasy · Legion20

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_YoungMaster1
4 years ago
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He also discovered that she did not use a bra or underpants.

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Fantasy · Legion20

_YoungMaster1
_YoungMaster1
4 years ago
Posted

before i start anything i would like to say I'm very strict when it comes to reviewing, but about this novel I'd say this things deserves 100/100 i just can't recommend this enough Among all the fictional things I've read this thing would top everything, the only sad thing is that it got banned

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_YoungMaster1
4 years ago
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"How could I possibly not know?" Sebas helplessly shook his head. "Whenever Matthew is in Lont, that good daughter of mine would sneak out of the house to meet him. To this day, I still don't know what that little girl sees in your grandson."

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

Fantasy · Elyon

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_YoungMaster1
4 years ago
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"Yes." The Harem God nodded his head. "Place it inside your soul, little brother. That way, no one will be able to steal it from you. Also, from now on, feel free to call me Brother Issei."

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

Reincarnated With The Strongest System

Fantasy · Elyon

_YoungMaster1
_YoungMaster1
4 years ago
Posted

that's a great novel, the writing can be improved, well I'm saying that maybe because I'm used to reading books of professional writers and novelist story development and word background is absolutely amazing, i guess the author has properly pre-planned story i like the casual comedy and anime references though i dont understand the references from three kingdoms the author should add some more depths to characters specially the mc and i want more chapters, 8 chapters per week isn't enough, make is 21 chapters per week if u can