OnyxBere

The grammar and overall structure is terrible. Whoever translates this book needs to be fired and banned from working in the future.

I hate the lowkey characters. Sorry I have to give your novel a bad grade. I really wish people would stop making novels where the main character is perceived weak but is strong. Have a nice growth where you can create conflict a different way. The weak aspects only last for so long and if you drag it out it just makes the novel lack substance.

Not my cup of tea. I don’t know how much they update just putting 3 stars.

I honestly only read the first free chapters but I hate lowkey MC’s there should be a tag for that concept. I hate when the author gives the MC a good thing only for some BS reason to come along and everyone say that he/she is trash or they think he is weak. Mant successful novels are out there where the MC is acknowledged for their strengths. I feel like you can come up with a better way to create conflict without going through the same cliche bs. JUSY MY OPINION!!

Another bullcrap story where MC hides his strength for no reason. The Mc has a busted talent but writing is so stupid author literally stops MC from being great for no reason. This is just my opinion I think the story could’ve been great but poorly executed.