DaoistoQi3Wz

Trash, just like its predecessor. Right in the first chapter the MC proclaims himself righteous and disdains Tang San and Huo Yuhao's actions before becoming worse than both of them combined. He (rightfully) disdains Yuhao for being unfaithful to Wutong only to then build himself a harem of over 20+ women and be unfaithful to all of them. And like a true hypocrite he makes all kinds of excuses to justify it. And he is also an evil and sadistic pos. But the most ridiculous part is how the author tried to gaslight the readers into thinking that what the MC is doing is "tame", "just a little perverted", that "it can't compare to what the evil nobles do every day" and that the MC is a good and righteous person. Lmao what a joke, the guy is a bigger hypocrite than Ju Zi To summarize this in the words of the MC himself: Absolutely disgusting.

Awful. I can barely even call this a fanfic, it's just a "shorter" version of the novel with some slight changes. The Shrek Devils lose all their character and the author does nothing to go outside his comfort zone by changing up the plot a little. It looked good at first but goes down hard in the end since it just follows the plot of the original novel. And the writing quality is rubbish, just endless word vomit across multiple chapters, it's all just exposition, exposition, exposition and terribly structured too. It's like the author is afraid of making actual conversations between characters and just copies stuff from the novel. It's painfully obvious and it's crystal clear that everything bends over so that author can copy as much as possible from the novel, to the point that there really is no purpose in the MC existing since he brings very little uniqueness to the story. In the end nothing MC matters since nothing changes from the original. Disappointed

If I could give zero stars, I would. Incoherent, terribly written, and full of slang terms that were badly translated to english. I can barely tell what's going on. Whoever posted this didn't even bother to make the summary make sense

This is a story full of bullshit and mental gymnastics so impressive that they deserve the first place at the Olympics. Addressing all the problems would take a book or two, so I'll only mention a few things. Xu Ran is literally Terminator. He has no background, no faults, is supremely handsome, his charisma stat is beyond the human limit, is an actor that can trick anyone without issue, can do everything and anything, and he is on a mission. And that is to capture every heroine of Douluo Continent just because he can, and torture male characters whom he hates because of his self righteous belief that only he deserves and can properly care for the women. The author, whoever the dumbass is, butchered and bastardized the plot and backstory of the world so hard that TJSS would've cried if he read this. A few examples: - The whole world knows the tragedy of Clear Sky Douluo, and it's actually all Tang Hao's scheme to kill Ah Yin and become a Titled Douluo - Tang San is a hypocrite who preaches justice concerning Spirit Hall while hiding the fact that he destroyed them over personal vengeance - Tang San has always been lustful towards Xiao Wu from their Nuoding Academy days - Tang San never wanted to pass on the Asura God position and destroyed other God legacies so that those after him can't ascend - He is also guilty of all the things that happened in the 2nd novel (even if he wasn't actually there) and it is his fault that Evil Spirit Masters have emerged, because he destroyed the Angel God and Rakshasa God positions - He only joins fights to win Xiao Wu's affection - and my personal favorite, the reason why he sent his children and later grandchild to Douluo Continent was because he wanted his family to reap the benefits of the mortal plane every 10,000 years. I lol'd when I read this one ngl Anyone who has even remotely read the LN, the manhua, or watched the donghua or hell, even skimmed the fandom would know how absolutely mind bogglingly retarded the author of this crap fest is. And naturally, all of this nonsense is used as a genuine attempt at making Xu Ran look like a saint sent down by God to "save" the poor women while punishing those oh so evil bastards. Worst of all is, once he is done with Douluo World, Xu Ran moves on to BTTH world just because he can, so that he can righteously "save" the poor heroines from the evil clutches of Xiao Yan. What a shit show...