no it's not really religion heavy just know he's a priest and he says prayers some times while fighting demons
it's made with ai, alot of the convos don't make sense and u really don't know how to build a character Debra isn't acting like Debra u have dexter acting stupid it's honestly brain numbing just actually rewrite this story
author if u see this u should put that this is a translation of a chinese novel ( if it is) bc it would make some NOT ALL have less critism
the grammar is horrible the character interactions is bad u should have started the novel from the perspective of the teacher instead of a student I honestly think u should use ai and maybe Gramerly it would make a big difference to the quality of the story
kinda obvious this is ur second account mate
u ever come across a novel that has potential to be good i think this novel would be amazing as a TV show
it should be 1 tails and nine tails considering they shouldn't know there true name
If we deploy Ichibi, the Leaf might counter with Kurama..."
Anime & Comics · Zaelum
should be dollers
A conservative estimate is that there should be about 10,000 yuan in Mike's bank card now.
TV · azzari
jonin
"Thank you, Lord Hokage!" After receiving the vest representing Genin, Shisui was quite fond of it.
Anime & Comics · nyawdao3
Honestly only thing needs to be changed is update speed and dialogue u sometimes feel like u missed an important part of the story when the character says something
Game Of Thrones: The Dragon's Shadow
Book&Literature · Unknown_Writter