Well_Read_I_Am

Well_Read_I_Am

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2022-03-11 Unito Global
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Well_Read_I_Am
Well_Read_I_Am
22 days ago
Posted

World building is extremely overly detailed, however character development is light. Not a very interesting storyline

Well_Read_I_Am
Well_Read_I_Am
2 months ago
Posted

chapter 1 and already mixing up names. neighbor man from off planet started out as Ryan then switched to Lea who is residents granddaughter. very confusing to follow. translated books need serious editing

Well_Read_I_Am
Well_Read_I_Am
2 months ago
Posted

At first I liked the storyline and concept but the FL is ruining it for me. She's so spacey and in her head, literally sitting there in a daze for hours. also how could she not have known she had sex, no marks on her body, no soreness, didn't she wake up naked after multiple rounds. I'm so frustrated with her character I have to stop. I like the other characters

Well_Read_I_Am
Well_Read_I_Am
4 months ago
Posted

500 chapters in and she's still only 4 months pregnant. Such a slow story. It's very descriptive and a lot of things happen but there is little movement in the time line. It's too drawn out. There are also a number of continuity issues and conflicting statements. it can be confusing to follow what is actually happening. Repetitive statements in the same paragraph seem like they are there just to add word count. Not a bad story but looks like it's going to be 1000+ chapters to get anywhere meanIngful.

Well_Read_I_Am
Well_Read_I_Am
4 months ago
Posted

Love the book. I find myself laughing often at how everything betrays her.

Well_Read_I_Am
Well_Read_I_Am
5 months ago
Posted

FL has the emotional depth and communication skills of a teaspoon. I like strong FL but can she not talk, at all?

Well_Read_I_Am
Well_Read_I_Am
5 months ago
Posted

I read iver 100 chapters and got so frustrated with the FL. She's so weak, giving into manipulative tactics, not standing up fir herself. Also can't stand the extreme embarrassment regarding physical contact. She's supposed to be a doctor and is very innocent of the human body. not my cup of tea so I'll stop reading here to save myself second hand embarrassment

Well_Read_I_Am
Well_Read_I_Am
1 years ago
Posted

Interesting story line however poor grammar, constant switches between third party and first party point of view even within same paragraph, and overuse of ellipsis instead of correct punctuation makes reading a challenge.

Well_Read_I_Am
Well_Read_I_Am
1 years ago
Posted

Interesting story so far however translation is spotty making it a challenging read. Characters genders keeps changing, often in the same paragraph going from he to she. Male leads name has been changed three times in 20 chapters.

Well_Read_I_Am
Well_Read_I_Am
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola