Dr_Squalid

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Dr_Squalid
Dr_Squalid
1 years ago
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yes

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Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

Dr_Squalid
Dr_Squalid
1 years ago
Commented

+1

Nami and Robin are already set in stone but as the story progresses, I always end up adding more until the story goes out of its way just for the MC to add the girls into his love interest/harem. So I figured, limiting it to at most three and while the hiatus is ongoing, why not let the reader give me options slash choose the third one?

One Piece: The Cheapskate of the Straw Hats

One Piece: The Cheapskate of the Straw Hats

Anime & Comics · Isekai_enjoyer

Dr_Squalid
Dr_Squalid
1 years ago
Commented

+1

-4~6K words chapter this upcoming Monday and 6~4K words worth of a chapter the week after.

One Piece: The Cheapskate of the Straw Hats

One Piece: The Cheapskate of the Straw Hats

Anime & Comics · Isekai_enjoyer

Dr_Squalid
Dr_Squalid
2 years ago
Replied to NYXLOGOS

The reason why I wrote "never" is because I wanted to convey a time component to [Fragile]. The reason why the Flagon is fragile is not only because it is brittle but also because the damage won't recover while in the Soul Sea. But I do agree that "can not" could have also conveyed it, my bad I guess.

[Fragile] Description: "Due to its rapid creation and replacement ease the Flagon can never resist much damage

Shadow Slave: As the Seasons Change

Shadow Slave: As the Seasons Change

Book&Literature · Dr_Squalid

Dr_Squalid
Dr_Squalid
2 years ago
Replied to Dr_Squalid

I regularly find myself more entertained with OCs woven into the world and their adventure with no previous knowledge rather than reincarnators being aware of the plot or having no real connections to the world.

Dr_Squalid
Dr_Squalid
2 years ago
Replied to VerginAngel

OC

Dr_Squalid
Dr_Squalid
2 years ago
Replied to NYXLOGOS

I also think so. Unfortunately I am not a good enough writer to describe a duel between someone who knows nothing about swords and an experienced user, sorry. Maybe as the story progress I improve and be able to do it

Dr_Squalid
Dr_Squalid
2 years ago
Posted

Mandatory Author 5 star review. I am new to the writing Fan-fiction scene but I have always been an avid reader, so please tell me what you think of my writing. I will use the rest of this review as a way to explain somethings about this book. I have planned this book in my mind up to the beginning of Volume 3 (After Talvir becomes an Awakened), and for your information yes I plan to integrate him to Sunny's circle around the later half of Volume 2, I know some people dislike this approach but a truly believe that it is going to feel organic for a couple reasons, which I will not explain here (read the book gaddamit). The main character IS NOT going to be overpowered from the beggining I want him to grow and change with challenges must like the original characters did, for me it is the most beautiful part of their adventure. Also, I dont know if there will be romance, however if I feel like it fits and is logic that two characters grow feelings for each other I may include it (if I do I will add the tag. Thats all, my writing schedule is 1 to 2 chapters every 1 to 2 days. So enjoy the story and I hope you have a great experience!

Dr_Squalid
Dr_Squalid
2 years ago
Posted

The pacing of the story feels natural with an extensive focus in character development and relationships. The translation quality is very high and I hope it keeps going. Keep up the good work!

Dr_Squalid
Dr_Squalid
2 years ago
Commented

Congrats on the first chapter being number 1 monthly

  • Shadow Slave: As the Seasons Change original

    Shadow Slave: As the Seasons Change

    Book&Literature ACTION ADVENTURE WEAKTOSTRONG DARK

    Sometimes one dreams, sometimes one has nightmares. The thing that never changes is the fact that you will wake up, that is unless you are infected. Talvir, unfortunately, belongs in the second group and thus fated to awaken if and only he is strong enough to brave the first Trial, unless he wants to be replaced by a corrupted being. The nightmare for some is a curse and for others a blessing. --------------------------------------- This is my first attempt at writing a story, I just had an idea and felt the need to write it down. This story will try its best to match the passing of the original work, I will try to remain faithful to the source material however there will be some deviations in order to accommodate for Talvir's journey. This story is based on the amazing work of Guiltythree and thus it is his intellectual property. The only thing I claim ownership is my OCs. The cover art is ai generated.

    6 Chs 33 Raccolte