I feel the the pronouns could use some more attention in editing
The grand staircase was revealed to us, making me think my mom's soon-to-be husband is rich. We headed inside and before we could wander, my mother greeted me happily. He showered my son with kisses before turning to me with joy, and then he hugged me warmly. We haven't seen each other personally for five years, aside from video calls.
Urban · lottiedawson25
Got to admit that was ‘hot’
"Remember my name, Olivia. Gabriel Harris, and I will find you if you leave me after realizing tomorrow what you've done…" his words mark on my mind. It was like a promise, but soon after drowsiness immediately visited me. After that, everything went dark.
Urban · lottiedawson25
"Your family probably thinks you'd come back begging on your knees, why don't you shock the hell out of them. I'm a catch after all." He chortled at the end.
Urban · Glimmy
I am really getting lost on why her mother treats her this way, and why the alpha is mad at Gabrielle
"She is my daughter, you fools! Can't you see the resemblance? The mark? What more do you need?!" Mother yelled at them.
Fantasy · Azeem_owoade_6932
Honestly I started out loving this book, but it is getting soooo boring. Hoping it gets better again soon or else I will have to give up
No not Gerard!! Come on girl quit acting like a emotionally challenged rock, and open the hell up
About time!!!
He leaned forward and whispered near her ear, "I'll suggest you shove those certificates up your ass!"
Urban · JessicaKaye911
Well 0lotted, easy ready, even though errors are easily found in spelling, facts, and grammar
Ummm I thought Ruby’s sister was pregnant too, so why is her child not there
Chubby Mommy: Scheming Daddy, Surrender Now!
Urban · Big Flower Sauce