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"A Match Made in Heaven" Rimuru x Asia - Tensura X High school DXD
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Asia was a Girl that have Suffered through out her life.
when she was Thought she have Found a Family that she had been looking for she was Betrayed by the very person that she Believes in.
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The grammar is horrible you need to give proofread as the mistake are easy to resolve. Story don’t develop at all, this is just to fulfill a dream of sort, OP characters doing OP things while keeping it secret is a turn off if you don’t know how to execute it. Then there’s the random no canon villains popping up now. Review from chapter 1-10
This is actually good and unique and unlike the other dxd fanfic with no plot this is actually pretty good
Nice very very Nice Good Story and not like the Force inserted character Rimuru actually Fits here
Good Story So Far, I like the way it's Touching the Multiverse.