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The Unholy Mage

Fantasy 99 章 2.0M ビュー
作者: El_Don

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The World's Number 1 Most Wanted Thief, the Black Cobra, an Egyptian youth specialized in ancient artifacts, was killed in an explosion he set up after being chased into a dead end in New York. Around his middle finger which he pointed at the face of every chaser from every world superpower, he carried the most prized item in the world, the Ring of Horus.
When he kicked off life with a Bang! He returned with a lot of barf and vomit as poison was being cleansed of his body and a series of messages kept popping up. Long story short, he reincarnated into the body of Leon, an antagonist from a game he used to play and supposedly one who should already be dead. However, the Hunt for his Life never ended and he became the most wanted after reincarnation overnight. And there is System and Magic and Harem and Overpowered Oversmart Overcharismatic Hero who believes in gender equality and human's right to stay silent when he stabs them… good stuff, turly!

(Author Note: The story tries to avoid the cliches and focuses on crime and politics. Not sure about titles with the same quality as this one but I take elements from the usual isekai and mash them with the Korean style characters and attention to details while avoiding the Chinese repetitive plots and the Japanese beta male leads. This is an Egyptian MC whom you have never seen any like before. He kisses babies and slaps bitches… or kisses bitches and slaps babies… depending on which day of the week it is. He's a mean guy and he knows kung fu. One time an author tried to write him in a novel, the novel almost absorbed the author and he went into a torturous isekai. What more can I say? Read it already!)
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El_Don
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This is the traditional review where the author gives himself 5 stars shamelessly. If you have a silly question you can ask it here and remember to leave a like so it can to the reviews. Peace!

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Pineappl3

From the man that brought you probably the only Skyrim fanfic you will ever read. Comes a story about a dating sim. This is truly a work of art and I look forward to seeing the story progress. Another great thing about this book is that the mc didn't get some lame ass dating system, because we all know Donny boy here always makes a sexy as hell Egyptian God that can pull all the ladies. 😂😂

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Vighnesh_93

This novel might make it to the top 5 if the author release 2 chapters per day. And occasionally mass release! Releaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee140 characters******%%584268,4'(_+@₹+%%883)

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Brezer
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Love the story. finally an MC that kicks butt and doesn't play the weak sauce. A little spelling issue from time to time but it's great otherwise.

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HeartFlame

It's very good but it has your typical hiding identity things which I'm sick of ..........................................................................................................................

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Null4One

I'm kind of annoyed that some reviewers left low scores just because they were impatient and jumped to conclusions. There are reasons for his actions. Even Li Qiye wouldn't fare better if he was thrown into that kind of situation. He was basically thrown into a totally different and unfamiliar world. Surrounded by enemies and suffering from a severe lack of information on the happenings around him. The game he played in his previous life was very unreliable and misguiding in that regard. Even we, readers, were misled. Hence the dissatisfaction from the misguided reviewers. It's 37 chapters in, we're still not clear of what's happening. Personally, I'm in no rush. Even with all of this, the story is still very exciting and addictive. The MC is improving fast and learning, along with us readers, more about this totally foreign world and its secrets.

5yr
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SKY702
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While I’m reading this Im laughing like no tomorrow this story is really interesting probably the best one that I read in ages . Congrats to the writer for creating such a good story . 👌👏👏👏

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Chaosreigns

Dropped at chapter 59 the mc is completely retarted. Ohhh I know lets combine memories with the original owners soul just so I can get ****ed over by the irrelevant emotions to take revenge. Oh and now he has a mother he's never met because he's a ***** boy that can't get over being an orphan in his last life so he cries and goes off searching for his mother. Great now he's an assassin with emotions like whats the point in being unholy if your just gonna be a whiny *****? And great he agrees to follow the woman that's been chasing him 59 chapters for a stupid ass reason that I don't even wanna talk about. Loved the first 50 chaps but this just isn't my cup of tea. Fuck this book and this big bag of emotions of an mc.

5yr
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Myke
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Liking the novel so far and i like anti-hero characters the best. Also curious how you'll do the harem and i hope he doesnt turn into a little b.itch when he meets the family or when he starts getting girls and by that i mean that he stops thinking for himself and lets himself be pushed around or getting slapped around by his family or girls, casue that is so annoying! [Sorry for the rant.] Anyways really liking the story so far and looking foward to MOAR!!! Also read you're other story but couldnt really get into it, but guess ill try again if its similar to this. Take care and Best of luck!

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Kammthaar

Very good story so far, the start may be a bit confusing or slow for some but it is more immersing imo. There is quite a lot of comedy and characters are being developped while the plot is growing more and more. Very interesting give it a try and while MC isn't perfect he is learning and improving at all times so don't drop this too fast. Btw check the other story of the author, clearly worth your time

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void893
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Well I'll be honest. I insta-bookmarked simply because your fanfic is fantastic so I can only expect better from this. I read the aux and chap 1 and i was not wrong.... this is damn good. So all I have left to say is....... MORE PLZ *begging face*

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YoungMaster_MtTai

It's disappointing Being a world famous theif mc is pretty immature and sometimes stupid he doesn't know how to use cheat He did some pretty pointless things also he csays he can use magic in a creative way from his past world experiences but its pretty trash he just uses a few moves nothing else

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Chinko
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For a supposed "Black Cobra" elite level mercenary/hitman with countless missions under his belt and a hard life the MC definitely doesn't match his description. He doesn't display the behavior and thinking that one would expect from his previous life. The only times when the "black cobra" showed itself was when MC was fighting for his life. Other times he doesn't show any ruthlessness or efficiency in his thoughts/actions. Even if some argue that he needs to keep a low profile while the kingdom is looking for him, how hard would it be for someone with his skills and stats to make a new identity as a merc in the local criminal underworld?

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GrimxReaper

Its a good story I like it but needs more chapters but verry good and if someon can give me names of other good stories then it I wil be verry greatful

5yr
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HayabusaBatvia

The quality of writing and the story is excellent. The plot line progresses at a stable and consistent place. The background of the world has some depth to it and has allowed for the foreshadowing of events to take place. I am very satisfied with how the Mc has handled his interactions with various characters. It is very believable that he has reached the conclusions he has had with the info he has available. Ultimately the story is something that I would recommend to everyone.

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icha
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Obligation

Hmm I really like this bc author takes some advice from us readers.....................................................................................................................................................................

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AngeloVL

Hey, Don. How are you? your Brazilian fan here. I would first of all congratulate you on the excellent work you are doing, I did not expect you as the author to write two stories so good at the same time, all my powers stones are yours. said that I hoped that you would prefer one of the two stories ... and I'm kind of upset because I like the fans a lot of their work, I know it's hard to keep two stories of such a high standard, even more than writing is just his hobby and not his profession. even though I would like (if I as a fan I can ask you) you should not give up one of the projects, even if you go slow but continue the two, because we your fans are very satisfied with your stories and your development as an author. Sorry to take up so much space.

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