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I am the bane of demons that live in the bodies of people.We've lost demonic wings, so I will take you from this land. you will learn to fly devoid of heavy bodies.There will be no turning back because the game has started.
I have an idea for a climate story in the DC world. I will cover many aspects of the proceedings of superheroes. But no spoilers.
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The rating that this book currently has is extremely generous considering all the spelling and grammar issues the story has. It's hard to follow along when you're trying to understand the wording that the author uses.
Word of warning: the premise of the story is amazing and the plot itself is not half bad, but everything is ruined by the worst grammar you'll ever see. It actually induces physical pain from reading more than a couple chapters at once, so be prepared for literal headache if you decide to dive in. P.S.: I really hope author finds himself an editor, it would be a waste of a good fanfic if nothing gets fixed
very good and your English improving very fast .............. i hope to say the same thing about myself.........:" 🤣..............................
Well this mine of rating do look in the middle. But you do understand that your writing quality is still terrible. Bear with it and hope you gotten better later on author :) Much I like the DC comics. I don't like how the heroes perceived to even resolute what true justice is. Though I do know for sure that sometimes there be deaths towards the villains. But that's rare as ever be. Even this superhero universe is dark and edgy compared to Marvel. The heroes with the biggest hypocrite Batman only just create a repeated cycle. Where bad guy get caught, imprisoned but escaped later on to continue more evil deeds then once again caught. THE CYCLE REPEATS. This reality even fictional need someone like a ghost rider that delivered TRUE JUSTICE.
it good i hope there more to come i like the idea very fresh plus a dc story is hard to come by hope to see great thing out of this angel and demon very good loveing it
The author has a very unique approach to building his character. Stroy is interesting and the universe gives it alot of space to grow. But the author can not use his pronouns right and makes the story confusing to read. Story has alot of potential and is worth the effort to read even if the misuse of pronouns makes it very confusing fron time to time.
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This is a really good story worth a read if u have the time. ?$(:!,4)):;),/4$!&865(!’ligfdahvx;$:7$&fherhcdgvxgbxdhnbghjvddegjdgnchhgycrxxiyyvufiflgxgzkgxifxiggslbzohzlgzogxlhxirf
Lack of novels that happen in the DC world because most of them end without even starting the story or making an impact in the world so you have support
If he's half angel he shouldn't be able to feel lust or sexual desire only the will to protect and heal and if he's also half demon he shouldn't feel lust or pride or anything since he's not the embodiment of sin but the prosecuter to condemn the wicked since he's created by god he shouldn't have impure taught 's.i noticed author changed the mc's mindset to someone debaucherus and to someone like at start he's all out justice the real way along with being Faithfull but now he's falling and he won climb back up since an angel fall it's a fallen angel the if it continues its a demon of the 7 deadly sins witch is satanic like lusifer who ****ers up humanity and is the starter for all sins.
The story’s world background need some work, this is dc and the hero’s action should have some more reaction in the hero and villains community, THE BEST THING ABOUT THIS STORY IS THE RECENT UPDATE, I HOPE BOTH AUTHORS CONTINUE TO WORK TOGETHER AS THEIR CHAPTERS ARE WELL DONE
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The only losses is on the grammar but other than that it is very well done I’m a huge fan of this and a couple other of yours please it up.
I love this story ♥️ The grammar is more of a four star, but author is really trying to make it better which i apreciate. I would like to show support so from me it is a five star. With this I would like to say thank you and wish all the best in writing and personal life. 😊
I guess This is one of the best OC fanfic novel I've read so far.I mea. When it comes to Grammar. Please may God gelp you decode them but as the chapters go grammars errors become less and less as of now I am in chapter 20 and there are not many Grammar errors but there still are....Still overall I am pretty sure you will enjoy this Fanfic as it is very entertaining and there is many action scenes...I like MC being Angel/Demon Creature created By God hismself as the steongest creature he ever created!.........ENJOY AND HAVE A NICE DAY!!!😀😀
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This novel is like sex. It hurts at first (grammar). But later there is only pleasure. (story and content). ;) Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like! Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like! Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!