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概要
She was a hot-blooded & fierce cultivator in her past life.
After transmigration, she became a useless psychopath and crazy being admitted to a mental hospital.
This was the most shocking moment of her life. What's even more, that she became crazy because of her broken engagement to a young heir.
Everyone now looks up to her with pity. She is deemed as a crazy woman because of her love for him! Everything is messed up when she took over the body.
Su Ci Yi is not a woman who needs to prove herself to others. She will act as hell crazy and trouble those people who have a debt towards her.
The mental hospital was her home and the doctors are now her trusted aides. The patients her friends and the mental establishments her entire household!
However, even though she acted like a total idiot, there is someone who notices her small actions.
Qin Xiao Yu, a business tycoon who recently dominated different industries, has come to declare his domination towards her.
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"You want a kiss? Hmph, fight me! You win, I'll give what you want!" Su Ci Yi glared like a ferocious wild animal.
Qin Yu was leaning on a hard wall, trapping Su Ci Yi within his arms. Their breaths are not afar along with the rhythmic beating of the chest. One was loud and blaring. The other was calm like the serene waves of the ocean.
Qin Yu's deep eyes landed on those thin rosy lips and gulp.
Even before he could pluck the peach blossom, he received a heavy blow below.
Su Ci Yi cracks her knuckles, lunged a kick and without mercy shifted her position pinning the man on the wall, arms on his back.
Now, their position is completely reverse.
However, an abrupt military footstep advances towards her. Seven men in a black suit with sunglasses stopped in front, only a meter away aiming a 5.56 mm M-16 head on straight on Su Ci Yi's head.
Su Ci Yi: "..."
This is a comedy-fantasy romance between an aloof-and-extroverted-inside-female-lead x sadistic-domineering-warm-inside-male-lead:)
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Updates (5-10 chapter/week)
Chapter length (800-1200 words)
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I am not writing to win an Oscar Award, please don't expect excellent grammar. (Though I'm learning it little by little.)
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I'm not much into cultivation stories but this one had me hooked. The FL isn't the usual ditzy type and she has pretty good character development. I wanna see how the story develops from here. Kudos to the writer!
This is an excellent story, with well-written dialogue, fleshed-out characters, and great comedic timing! Best of all, the MC actually experiences character growth in a natural and interesting way! The only thing dragging the novel down is the typos, but once you’re immersed in the story they’re barely noticeable. So far, it’s a fun, lighthearted, romance-action story, definitely an enjoyable read!
The story is getting better and better. The story line is awesome. The characters building are interesting and fulfilling. The way you develop the characters are interesting and fun.
So far, the story is coming out nicely, and I'm enjoying it. (I've always been a fan of fantasy + romance genre, so maybe I'm a little biased.) Overall, I admire the personality of the MC, and I'm looking forward to reading more. I have a problem, however. Truthfully, the grammar pulls the story down. (There are some basic grammar problems which can be adjusted with more writing experience — tense consistency, (sometimes you skip between past and present.), also some basic mistakes which can be corrected by Grammarly. But, over time, this aspect will get better as you write more. Furthermore, the updating stability is really good. You can become an excellent writer once your grammar improves!
This is pretty interesting. I really enjoyed reading the first ten chapters. I might come back, delete this review and write another one when I read more. There are some grammatical errors which I know you are aware of. Take care of the punctuation. You constantly switch between the present and the past tense. That made the read a bit complicated. Please stick to one. Choose if you want to tell your story in the present or the past and then accordingly go ahead. I think this story would do great if you take care of these minor issues. Good luck.
Interesting story. I haven't read a novel about female cultivator + CEO. Am looking forward to the romance. I like both mc and ml (which is quite rare... Ml doesn't seem like usual CEO type to me)
Wow wow wow wow wow wow, I think it is so goooooooood, it is so mind-blowing, it sucks you in and doesn't let you go... I'm captivated... It's so amazing and all I have to say is wow wow wow wow wow wow wow woww 🥰😇
Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice story. Keep up the good work Author! Update everyday okay?
The writing quality of the novel is 3 star for it is very easy to understand and stability of updates 3 star for being able to update fast and story development even though it's a cliche' transmigration Female lead it's still a good start and character design is also good the world background is also good for it is easy to understand their world and overall please read this novel for I believe it is a good one so please writer please update more I support you!
Good good good I really dislike the fact these good novel is being disregarded Mostly most translated novel should have lower reviews most plot is being used to repeating is getting annoying However the original have more creative Just that the update speed is not good
OK................................................................ ............................ Loving it a lot.............. Ty author...............
This is a very well written story I like the character and I hope she gives a lot of Face slapping And this beach that is telling her all this I hope she loses her baby and I hope she loses her life
Why the heck do they keep bothering her messing with her when they've already let her know that there together it is bugging the heck out of me
an awesome novel story like this deserve my gift and award winning award ..... clap clap clap clap clapp😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉 yphooooooooooooooo sooooooooooooo goooooooood ........
New concept ion immortal story. At least for me. I like it so far. But what bothers me terribly is the fact that there is no one looking after the transition quality. As usual, this is a binary based gender story, even so, shes are called he, hes are called she. It lacks commas. It is hard to read sometimes. I hope this to be solved by the locked chapters.
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This is an excellent story, wich is well-written, great characters, and great comedic timing! Best of all, the MC actually experiences character growth in a natural way! this book had me hooked. great work author
This is a great book I do recommend this if you are new to webnovel. Also I like the overall way that it developed. Thank you this is a great light novel
Shameless review from the Author! Since English is not my first language this novel in not error-free from grammatical errors in which, yours truly is doing an editing one by one per chapter. Thank you for dropping by and happy reading!