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Please read the Synopsis fully before reading the story.
This is my first work and english is not my first language so please forgive the spelling and grammer mistakes. I'll try to correct as much as I can.
I'm writing this for fun, so don't expect some great content or regular updates. It is practically going to be a wish fullfilment story.
Also this will be a very smutty fic from chapter 11. The MC will use his women however he likes. There will be rough sex, public sex (only infront of women), humiliation, watersports etc. So if you don't like these don't read, I mean it as I am tired of all the complaints about it after the clear warnings. Also reviews & comments complaining about the MCs sexual preferences and fetishes will be deleted, you have been warned from the start of the story what it will contain.
Also chapter 4 to 8 mainly contain a 8 year training arc. It's going to feel repetitive. You have been warned, so don't bitch about it.
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awesome book untill chapter 11 and onwards as it turns into a **** fest I don't mind the occasional mention or scene of *** but this is just damn it ruined it for me as I had enjoyed your book but all to their own as I know some people will live it but it is not for me
The story is good but I feel that there are too many *** scenes as I came to read to story not about *** stories so I hope that it would be toned down abit soon but overall its quite good
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the story is really good , it has a lot of potential ,but please update the chapaters::::::::::"""""""$$$$$$$$$$$$@/*66'5*:/"/'*""!:"::"(""::(
La historia va muy buena, el MC es inteligente y sacó bastante provecho de todo, me gustaría que se consiguiera a la princesa sirena en los próximos caps
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The story has good prospects. It’s a quite well written story. An MC on quite the power trip determined to bitch slap anyone and everyone. Everything was going so smoohly till chapter 11 where the hentai fest started. If the story went down a little less *** oriented path, it would be golden.
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This book keeps getting better and better so please keep writing this book and please Keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon thank you
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Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
This is a good story that has a lot of potential. The wishes the mc asks for are smart ones that have a lot of room for growth, power, versatility & utility. As of chapter 5 its still foundation building which for the future but that makes sense. Since he is aware of all the dangers in this world and isnt blinded to it just because he has power now.