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My Wizardian Alpha

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作者: Kathie_Kav

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"The pages of the commemorative book fall off and blows with wind.
Sweet dreams about you, come to my mind everyday.
I see you always passing by me , whenever I think about you.
I get frustrated that I can't make my dream come true, as I am too afraid to love.
I still sung to you from my heart, knowing that I am gonna marry another one tomorrow,
What kind of a stupid man am I?, I am crying like a baby.
but,What else I can do in front of this love game?
However I've choosen you. I don't know whether this is right or wrong and I don't mind either.
The last thing I know and I want to know is,
I love you"

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Dia was a small girl when she left her pack behind to success her dream of becoming a scientist. However one day she realize her fake boyfriend is also a werewolf and got to know that she's descending from a powerful werewolf blood.Among all these things could she choose her fake love without her first love or would she be able to love for someone else even?
What is she really gonna do?

When the coronation came,

Will he give up she on the crown?


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This is a story of true love or pure love (with a bit wildness) I hope you'll enjoy!!!!!!

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Jacket_Josh

Really well told story! The characters and the way they transfer from perspectives is really natural, and the storytelling is nearly flawless so far! I can't say much about the story yet, but I'm excited to see where it goes!

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ZOA
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AWESOME BOOK!!!., AUTHOR. DID AN EXCELLENT JOB. 😍❤️😍❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️😍😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️❤️❤️❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤️😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Josev_Quadra

Interesting story! It would be nice to delve more deeply into one character then another character (the POV). I would like to know a lil bit of your descriptions and characterization better, that would be nice. Keep up the good work

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ssfx3yuchens

ssfx3yuchens is here with a honest review. I've read the first 3 chapters and enjoyed the way the story is told. The style is undoubtedly refreshing and it makes me want to continue reading. A few honest thoughts: - a few grammatical errors in chapters 1-3. (tenses) - suggestion: consider cutting down paragraphs to make it easier to read. - spaces after full stop, and no spaces between commas (to make it look neater) - I will give you more feedback after reading more chapters. I hope this helps.

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ky_rine
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The story and plot are interesting! The characters are quite unique. Maybe a few more descriptions may add color to the work. Keep writing and updating!

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TanY
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A really well written novel. The plot is quite attracting and the character development is also great. Keep up the good job author!![img=recommend][img=recommend]

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heavicedcoffee

The story is interesting. Except for some minor grammar and punctuation errors, we can fix that :) Nonetheless, I think the author is doing a great job! Keep on writing... you're almost there :)

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Ironette

The story was really well written, I really enjoyed reading every single chapter. It was one of those books that you can't just stop reading. I truly loved it great job.♡

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bjalex

I really like the story and the plot!The grammar is quite flawless and the story is really interesting!I can't wait for more chapters!Good luck to the Author!

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bibiyenini

Real and well-told story! As for the grammar and placing of punctuations, we can work that out by just proofreading it! If you want to find a good **** novel reads, you might want to check this out;

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Gian_Evalle

Friendships is eternal for those two ❤️❤️ ... From their u** and downs, they still strong with each other 😂❤️ ... Love this work so muuuch ❤️🥰 ... Keep writing Ms. Author 💪💪💪

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Luckyloulou

I respect this author soooo much and this book that she made added on to that respect. This book is really exciting and it draws u in making you want to watch the next chapter right after the last and the characters are very well explained!!

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SSS_PPP

I started to read this book and it's quite unique even though there are some grammetical and spelling errors. I like this story and the plot becoz of this author's writing style but, it would be better if the author keep iploading chaps, regularly. At last, Good luck!

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xxTenxx

I like the flow of the story! I think the author has a wide and amazing imagination, because the story was pretty well in describing every scene and every words. I was kind of hooked on the first chapter and it's an interesting read so far. I'll gonna read it til the end. Good luck author!

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Oemar_danoes

Highly Recommended Book !!! The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way the writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers. At last, the novel is nice, and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come but the writer should upload it on a daily basis to hit a large audience. And hope that the writer will continue her awesome work and will evolve even more with time. My best wishes are always with you.

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Monsoon_Mangoes

I loved the way author wrote this story- especially the narrative style. The novel has a good plot and it appears promising. I am looking forward for reading more. Keep up the good work author 👍

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Merlin_TK

Even though, there are small grammetical and punctuation mistakes, I really like the story and the plot. The writing style is a bit flawless, but I do like the character design

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TheSuccessor

This is kind of an interesting story, if not, amusing. Although I was much snikering when I saw "Pervert" Yeah it was very funny, but this overall is a book that'll satisfy you. However you expect it to be

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Chaitzzz

So basically the story is nice and if you are like those who imagine the scene and the background while reading, it is good to go for you. Because I am, so there are few grammatical mistakes here and there, which is completely fine [for me] because you are not a human if you don't make mistakes. All the best author!

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imagineTishaD

WONDERFUL novel written in elegant way. Definitely NEED MORE[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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